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The Future Me

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The Future Me

Gloomy sixteen
Yet seventeen, beloved gone
You may young but you are strong
I am the ghost of your future, so here I am

You are twenty four, another beloved gone
No worries, someone besides you
Many obstacles will you pass
Not easy, but quiet a journey

People will betray you, but faith keep you sane
Your journey will fill as hello and goodbye
Be keen, be strong, be patient, keep the faith on
You will not fail, because here I am, the succeed you 

Regard,
Future You


December 27, 2012
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1st place
Hello / Goodbye Contest
Sponsored by:  David Williams

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  1. Date: 1/8/2013 4:37:00 PM
    Yanny, Congratulations with your winning poem in David's awesome contest.. pd

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/8/2013 5:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda, it would not be complete without your support :D
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 7:37:00 PM
    I love this intention.... Bravo

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/7/2013 9:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Darren glad to see you here :D
  1. Date: 1/6/2013 5:55:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/6/2013 7:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Debbie, it's really nice to have you here too :D
  1. Date: 1/5/2013 4:48:00 PM
    wow, first place! BIG congrats to you. I had never seen this one yet. It's very unique!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/6/2013 7:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Andrea yours are unique as well, :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 1/5/2013 9:34:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Yanny!! Happy New Year and Good day! :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/5/2013 9:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Maria :D happy new year to you too :)
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 1:34:00 PM
    Congratulations! Wishing you a Happy New Year!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/1/2013 4:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Ndaba, happy new year too :D
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 8:21:00 AM
    My hearty congratulations on your super win and great write my dear poet friend, Yanny! Happy New Year, too! love and hugs, Leonora

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/1/2013 4:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Leonora, congrats to you too :D, and happy new year :D
  1. Date: 12/31/2012 5:47:00 PM
    Yanny congrats on your win, you certainly succeeded, well done...David

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/1/2013 1:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks David, your contest is really interesting :D I really enjoyed it, happy new year David :D
  1. Date: 12/31/2012 5:27:00 PM
    Hey Future girl! Congrats on excellent win. Happy New year!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/1/2013 1:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Congrats to you too :D
    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/1/2013 1:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello friend! :D thanks and happy new year too :D
  1. Date: 12/31/2012 3:33:00 PM
    Congratulations and a Happy New Year.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/1/2013 1:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Menhaz :D Happy New Year too :D
  1. Date: 12/31/2012 2:29:00 PM
    Big congrats Yanny love, and all the best for the new year xx

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/1/2013 1:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mandy :D happy New Year too and all the best as well :D
  1. Date: 12/31/2012 2:06:00 PM
    Congrats :))

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/1/2013 1:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Anne, happy New Year! :D
  1. Date: 12/29/2012 4:47:00 PM
    This is good. Always have faith. Thanks for sharing. Happy New Year. Lucilla

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 12/29/2012 6:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Luci, Happy New Year to you as well :D
  1. Date: 12/29/2012 3:25:00 PM
    this is amazing Yanny,, have a happy New Year...

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 12/29/2012 4:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Harry :D Happy New Year too :D
  1. Date: 12/27/2012 11:44:00 PM
    Exceptional writing. I love the "be keen, be strong" line! Best of Luck to you!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 12/27/2012 11:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Audonus :D best luck to you too :D
  1. Date: 12/27/2012 11:00:00 AM
    Very good poem to your 16 year old self. Good luck in the contest :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 12/27/2012 4:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Anne :D, i'm wondering if this could be real :D
  1. Date: 12/27/2012 6:57:00 AM
    Oh too cute, Yanny. You can see the strong one emerge. Awesome. Good luck with the contest :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 12/27/2012 7:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Toquyen your comment is always encourage me more to write :D