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The case of Love

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The case of Love

In the case of life Love turns from plaintiff to defendant
Justice the judge, is impartial throughout the hearing
Love left to plea for it’s mere existence
Justice in the process of rearing the ugly verdict
You called upon Wisdom, says Justice
Which you considered to be your greatest ally
However Wisdom proved to be your downfall
Because Wisdom does not reside with you
In fact Folly is your greatest ally
You , Love, Called upon compassion
Compassion could not offer you solace
You had received all Compassion could give
You gave it away at every chance
Love, you then blamed betrayal for your failings
Betrayal proved that also it was never in your way
Moreover it was working in your interest at every turn
Only hiding it’s motives to protect your constituents 
Justice says, I must say you are the greatest charity worker
You work in the interest of no one and in the interest of everyone
Your logic is error and your error is logic
A true contradiction of yourself
You live on a path between Triumph and Tragedy
Taking either route as you go through Time
You say Happiness is your goal
You say that Hope will lead you there
Have in Time, Hope can prove true or false
Then you claim you then are the goal in yourself
But you have already proved to be a contradiction
What then can be said about you Love
I say you make the greatest case, with the least evidence
There is your virtue and your vice

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  1. Date: 8/7/2013 7:17:00 PM

    Well i truly enjoyed it!hahaha!i too am a hopeless romantic!soooo great job!I would love to read a love poem!let me know if you decide to do one

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 11:05:00 PM

    Dear Wayland, I love that I took my time and read nearly all your poems ((YET)) logic is error, and error is logic.. I got a bad case of love... sometimes I feel the justice will never heal or feel real... why was i searching for the wrong vice~ .. glad to meet you and add you on to my favorite poet list... reading you to night was all worth my while... xox~ LINDA

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 1/22/2013 11:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well you said three very flattering things. I am a hopeless romantic, logic in the case of human relations is always error because we're not Vulcan, star trek, but I'm sure you got that. Thank you so much for this very wonderful comment.
  1. Date: 1/4/2013 12:14:00 AM

    Can I comment on my own poem? Haha, I guess I can. This poem is an allegory. That is the form not part of the title. It could end up being something longer like death knocks, but in the mode of say the trial and death of Socrates by Plato, Where socrates uses the method of elenchus, a greek word just meaning question and answer. That's where the inspiration is from, of course this is the short version and may be the only version. Thanks everyone for reading.

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 10:00:00 PM

    Complex write, with many facets, will have to read a few times to digest. I have put it in my fav basket to look again.

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 1/4/2013 12:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your kind words. You have commented on a couple of my poems and I want to thank you for taking time to read them.
  1. Date: 12/28/2012 1:26:00 AM

    Wow! This is an amazing write Wayland! I love the courtroom scenario and Love trying to make a defense and oh all the workings against it - very cleverly done. Very well penned poem!

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 1/4/2013 12:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I left you a comment, I guess it was too long. I want to thank you for reading my poem and your insight on it.
  1. Date: 12/27/2012 3:35:00 PM

    I just read this insightful poem, Wayland and I must say it is profound! I'e read it twice and will be adding it to my Favs' List. Also, Welcome to PS! I hope you'll like it here...please leave comments for the others so that they may come read your amazing work you share. Happy New Year! Annalise

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 12/27/2012 6:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I don't think many had read this poem until your comment. I want to thank you again for your kind words.