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On the Edge of a Dream

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Below is the poem entitled On the Edge of a Dream which was written by poet Michael F Lewis. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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On the Edge of a Dream

Your silhouette caught in the sun Our lip’s first time at tasting bliss This prelude to a winter’s fall New hearts now closer than a kiss On the edge of a dream undone

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  1. Date: 1/9/2013 8:54:00 AM
    Congratulations! So cool that you were able to include each of Andrea's catch phrases in your poem. Very well done :)

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:32:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win, Michael. I love this one :-)

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:57:00 AM
    Belated congratulations on your winning spot Michael xx

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:17:00 PM
    Congrad's to a rising star of Poetry Soup. Light & Love

    Lewis Avatar Michael F Lewis
    Date: 1/8/2013 9:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank yo very much Debbie!
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 5:46:00 PM
    So YOU are the mystery guy. I blogged about you at my blog a few days ago when I announced my winners. I was not able to locate the author of this poem by typing in its title. Now that I got my winners list to come up, I can see who you are. You won third place in my contest with this terrific poem. What I thought best about it: the way you managed to show every one of my five "catch phrases" in each line. BIG congrats.

    Lewis Avatar Michael F Lewis
    Date: 1/8/2013 9:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am always a mystery.....yeah right! Thank you Andrea! I don't really know how to use this site fully yet, like for example...I didn't know there were blogs! Ha! Oh well!
  1. Date: 12/30/2012 7:47:00 AM
    A beautifully written poem Michael. - HAPPY NEW YEAR!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Lewis Avatar Michael F Lewis
    Date: 1/8/2013 9:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne Lise!