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Your eyes

Two deep unfathomable seas
 Slightly separated but forever joined
 Profoundness and depth unimaginable
 Even the most savvy sailor is instantly lost
 Not knowing which is the safe way home
 It's not to mine nor anyone's  great surprise
 That I fell lost in love staring into your eyes

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  1. Date: 1/22/2013 11:11:00 PM

    I love the feeling of love.... I will dwell on this poem some more... xox~LINDA

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 1/23/2013 12:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    By the way I did notice all of your comments and that would be the x to the something flattery of yours. Thank you for all of your time.
  1. Date: 1/6/2013 4:36:00 PM

    Awee. how sweet! lucky girl. hello there and nice to meet you. thank you for your comment i appreciate it.

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 1/7/2013 6:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well thank you for your comment and it's also nice to meet you.
  1. Date: 12/26/2012 10:55:00 PM

    True poet when I see one. I can feel lost in the feeling you create. Awesome, Wa Bu. Love it :)

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 12/26/2012 11:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much. Your comment is very flattering to a semi new poet.
  1. Date: 12/26/2012 8:37:00 PM

    Very nice wa bu, I wonder does anyone fall in love any more, but after reading this maybe they do.. have a great day :)

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch Date: 12/26/2012 9:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." Plato Love and the pursuit of, have allowed to me to escape pure philosophical thinking to pursue poetry. I commented to someone earlier that the loss of self is one of the deaths that love dies, well it's also the birth of love, and it is a great fall, but where would we be without it.