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About This Poem

Passionately Yours,

             Passionately Yours


         Hills of joy we rode ahead,
    Down the valleys sweet we buoyed;
         Like  river merging ocean,
              Solace I devoured.

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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 1/27/2013 6:29:00 PM
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    Hello Mehnaz, stopping by to say hi, and read the dodoitsu poem again. still loving the gallop and swallow of your poem. with passion I hold on tight to your words.. always~ LINDA
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    Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 1/15/2013 10:49:00 AM
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    ‡ I Am A Huge Fan Of Priceless Passion, Sweet Beautiful Mehnaz ˜ Yet The Greatest In This, Is Borne From Love's Heart; Stirring These Embers And Then, Their Flames ˜ 'Solace,' We Must Always Strive To Devour; Lost At Sea ˜ Thank You, For Your Beauty's Kind Wonderful Visit; 'Lovely.' ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/15/2013 11:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you , Rose.
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    Mystic Rose
    Date: 1/11/2013 5:06:00 PM
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    You build an entire emotion on four lines here, I am enjoying your short powerful writes, have a blessed evening xxx

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/15/2013 11:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank your for your kind words.
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 1/8/2013 7:57:00 PM
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    stopping by to read this one again... my favorite poem of yours so far... thank you for the soup-mail.. it pulled me on to the soup today... always~ LINDA

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/8/2013 9:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you and lol for coming back.... I am glad you are here. Love n hugs , Linda.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 1/1/2013 10:04:00 AM
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    really lovely!

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/8/2013 9:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Andrea,
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 12/29/2012 4:40:00 PM
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    so much inferred in so few lines..good job! Light & Love

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/8/2013 9:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You,
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 12/28/2012 3:15:00 PM
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    Mehnaz Veetil,, wow... this is a short form... but the best poem I've read all day... and believe me I've read over 100 so far.. many are good and awesome.. but none of them made me fall in love with the image..>LOL< I'm gonna say it~ my favorite image is ... devouring the comfort in the joyful path you are exposing with love... love this... so so much... always~ PD

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 12/29/2012 12:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Linda for your lovel comments....thanks for stopping by ....
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    harry horsman
    Date: 12/27/2012 6:01:00 AM
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    this is wonderful poetry, in fact this is beautiful...

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 12/29/2012 12:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you ,Harry
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 12/27/2012 4:30:00 AM
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    Beautiful dodoitsu here, lovely write and great entry for the contest. Thanks for stopping by.

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 12/29/2012 12:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Yesha for stopping by..... well, this was not a contest entry,
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 12/26/2012 1:52:00 PM
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    I really like the flow and rhythm to this one..It has a special poetic quality to it..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 12/29/2012 12:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    THank you Sara ....


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