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A Slick Girl

She’s so slick a beautiful girl Sitting on a rock, solid stone She envisions dreams of the world Every sight breaks into her bone Enlightened she does stand upright She’s so slick a beautiful girl Timeless her beauty in the light Shines brighter than what is unfurled Water flows to her and her curl Covering her feet with wetness She’s so slick a beautiful girl Her demeanor is a kindness Her life spreads over these wet stones Seeing her makes you want to twirl Joy fills your heart with wondrous tones She’s so slick a beautiful girl
Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 12/27/2012 12:51:00 PM

    Very creative and articulate theme you penned here Russell. A way to a person's heart for sure. Hugs and luv, Gail

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 12:16:00 AM

    so enjoyed reading your fantastic words again Russell luv .. an amazing write to get me motivated again .. Ron has me on half hour segments on site till I am stronger my friend .. hope u had a grand Christmas and wishes for a blessed NY luv

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 8:46:00 PM

    Russell, a beautiful thought,, SOme times kindness is the best and slickest way to anyone heart.. I like this poem.. and it's little flow... The way you described here, was lovely and perfect... always~pd

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 3:46:00 PM

    Hello my friend, and this is a slick beautiful poem. Outstanding work Russell. Rollo

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 1:24:00 PM

    very nice, Russell. I loved the part saying she demeanor is a kindness.

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 11:18:00 AM

    Enjoyed the imagery. love, Mehnaz