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Closer Than A Kiss

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I found pictures of Envelope Quintets on the internet..They are when someone writes them on an envelope or sends them to someone in a letter..

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Closer Than A Kiss

The zephyr that I couldn't dismiss
And pouring rain only sounds heard
Then the Spirit gave a good word
Go to sleep_rest, Spirit did undergird
God's presence, closer than a kiss  

Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
contest: A Catch-Phrase Dazzler: 1 In 5 Choice
Written: December 26, 2012

Envelope Quintet/ information found
Meter at the discretion of writer
Rhyme scheme can be_a, b, b, b, a or 
a, b, c, b, a(usually when more than one stanza 
then the stanzas interlock)

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  1. Date: 1/12/2013 8:50:00 PM
    Beautiful ma'ma.. hello there nice to meet you .

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:08:00 AM
    Belated congratulations on your winning spot Sara xx

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 7:12:00 PM
    congrats to you, Sara. I especially loved the last line!!

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:32:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 9:57:00 AM
    Nice write, surprise me here.

  1. Date: 12/31/2012 6:15:00 AM
    i personally love this one :) on soup after a long long time, happy new year!

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 12:03:00 PM
    BRAVO Sara! So well composed, with a smooth flow, excellent rhyming and an inspirational message! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 8:08:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your poem dear Sara. Wishing you a wonderful holiday season. Warmest thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 8:49:00 PM
    Sara, i like this... beautiful... pd

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 6:56:00 PM
    Yes, very. Love it, Sara. Good luck with the contest!

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 2:46:00 PM
    yes i feel his presence, when the angels show us bliss

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 1:08:00 PM
    descriptive... ture! the intimacy of the Spirit glues one to the Father

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 11:13:00 AM
    Enlightening write , enjoyed.

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 10:32:00 AM
    Beautiful and uplifting a write Sara. Good luck to you with this one.

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 8:14:00 AM
    This is a wondrous write my friend! I really lovred reading this amazing and powerful poem this morning! what a delightful and pleasant piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 7:40:00 AM
    I like this one. Thanks for reading my poem (Heckle & Jeckle) It was a horrible time.

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 7:38:00 AM
    Excellent and extremely wonderful verse which uplifts one's spirit my dear friend, Sara. God's presence is really closer than a kiss. A winning piece for me! Thank you so much for sharing! Merry Christmas to you and your love ones! Wishing you all the best. love always, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 7:25:00 AM
    not familiar with this 'envelope quintet', but it is a lovely write... i like the word 'zephyr'....