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You

I look at you and I see perfection 
even though you’re moving in the wrong direction.
You’ve hurt me by tearing my heart
and forcing us to be apart.

Your eyes are an intriguing sky blue 
which I’m drawn to like glue
whilst your smile lights up my day 
resulting in me not knowing what to say. 

My friends tell me to stay away 
thinking you will lead me astray 
They don’t know the real you 
and now I feel like there’s no one here to turn to. 

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  1. Date: 3/31/2013 4:09:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Christina! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 11:22:00 AM

    Congrats, Christina. Excellent. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 10:56:00 PM

    Christina, congratulations with your awesome love poem.... rendering the best part of life~ always*LINDA

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 5:36:00 PM

    Nice featured poem~SKAT

    Purdon Avatar Christina Purdon Date: 1/28/2013 5:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks SKAT
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 9:39:00 AM

    Christina Purdon, :-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself a lovely Sunday.... always & forever *LINDA

    Purdon Avatar Christina Purdon Date: 1/28/2013 5:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much
  1. Date: 1/14/2013 1:01:00 AM

    Nice Rhyme beautifully arranged and believable. Well done. Always~Ali

    Purdon Avatar Christina Purdon Date: 1/28/2013 5:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, based it on how I truly feel so I guess from the perspective that is how it's believable. Thanks a lot!