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A Dark Fantasy

I’m on a planet with a golden kiss
It shimmers with glory, such bliss!

As I zoom in, it turns into a dark land
Peep in, I’m afraid, I cannot stand!

In darkness, I see a bright glowing tower
Inside, a plethora of so called ‘man’ power

Zoom in; I see ‘beast’ kind disguised as ‘man’ kind
Alas! Not a single kind beast could I find

I hear roars of uncivilized beings
And moans of so-called weaklings

I see a trail of emotional turmoil
Those 7 deadly sins wrapped in a dazzling foil

Gifted to humanity, his power, his grey matter
It separates humans from animals and allows us to shatter

The once created planet with a golden kiss
Will it ever show the signs of holy bliss?

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  1. Date: 1/20/2013 7:05:00 AM
    Great poem!!!!:D

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 12:36:00 AM
    The title seems almost a contradiction, but the title drew me to read it. I like the poem. I'm surprised there haven't been any comments yet. Most of the lines can actually be internalized to reflect the self, as well as projected onto society, nice poem.

    Godambe Avatar Neha Godambe
    Date: 1/8/2013 1:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dear...I am glad you read it and liked it :) Thank you :D