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Caught in the Sun

On the beach,as  sun glazes with pleasure,
Gentle touch on my back makes me feel glee,
Then came darkness with storm of great measure,
Legs move ; water rises; This baffles me ,
as my date becomes the late by a tree.



CONTEST:"A CATCH-PHASE DAZZLER" Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

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  1. Date: 1/8/2013 7:59:00 PM

    Except for the last line, I really did like this one, Olusequn. Thanks for supporting my contest!

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 12:50:00 PM

    lovely write - congrats : )

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 4:17:00 AM

    enjoyed this olusegun.. lovely little poem...

  1. Date: 12/25/2012 6:05:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading your wonderful entry for Andrea's contest.Thanks for stopping by with your congratulatory note and wish you a Merry Christmas.