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Twas the Night Before Christmas

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Twas the Night Before Christmas


On the eve of Christmas from an ICU bed
A joyous miracle about to be seen
A homeless man laid his fractured head
Ten hours prior shook his tambourine

Without earthly possessions he still felt rich
Praising his God from a corner in the alley
Beaten and discarded in a dark muddy ditch
Prepared to sail out on his grand finale 

The hospital staff was stunned and dismayed
An image of Christ burst bright from his eyes
A heavenly miracle on our Savior’s birthday
A faithful servant received his eternal prize  


Written for Kim Merryman’s Contest-“Here We Go a Caroling”
A quatrain inspired by the title of a Christmas song
12-21-12

               

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  1. Date: 1/26/2013 3:20:00 PM
    love this, Gwendolen - thanks, loved the contest : )

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 11:36:00 PM
    Gwen, a belated congrats to you for your win with this one that really captured the spirit of the season!

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 4:50:00 PM
    RIX, congratulations in Kim's "Here We Go A Caroling " contest.. a fun poem with flow... always~ PD

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 10:45:00 AM
    I really liked this original take on the theme..1 thing only I don't think you want the word begot ..there? Conrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 9:50:00 AM
    Gwendolen, this was such a heart-wrenching story with a joyful ending. Well done! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 12/25/2012 7:25:00 AM
    I really like the last verse because it so well portrays the example and effect those that love Christ can have on others. Nice work!

  1. Date: 12/25/2012 6:13:00 AM
    What a lovely write on the spirit of Christmas! Wishing you and yours a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year, Gwen.

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 11:48:00 PM
    Miracles could happen anywhere and it occurs when least expected. Nice one!! Jag

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 9:25:00 PM
    I just want to wish you a very merry Christmas my friend!

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 2:37:00 PM
    this is beautiful Gwen, you and your family have a happy festive season...

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 9:42:00 AM
    GWen, does this mean that he died? How very sad and yet at the same time, it's so sweet that he had the light of Christ in his eyes at the end. YOu took a totally different route from me with this song choice and did wonderfully.

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 9:01:00 AM
    Wow Gwendolen, this is an extremely powerful and wondrous write here my friend! I am amazed at its truth and irony within the homeless man and joy...he was coming now to his eternal glory! And on Christmas to boot...what a way to go, I would like that myself, to be happy like he was, to feel rich even without possessions that I may want! And I do feel that way for I have my family, both here and on the Soup! I am surely blessed! Thank you for this poem! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 6:37:00 AM
    A nicely written poem! A little Christmas visit to you Gwen <3 Hope your Christmas will be peaceful and beautiful!! Sending you a big, warm Christmas hug !!! - HAPPY CHRISTMAS - //Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 5:46:00 AM
    Inspired writing Gwen,sure winner in my eyes! Merry Christmas to you and yours. Love Anne

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 3:11:00 AM
    optimistic and a sure win for the contest,...enjoy :-) Love, Mehnaz

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 10:05:00 PM
    great write Gwen...

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 8:31:00 PM
    aaah Gwendy,,, this is awesome... so very inspiring write and yes so true..the Miracle is always there..keep our faith and Trust...thanks for sharing your brilliant write...congratulation for the contest too :) be the winner !!!! :) <3<3<3

    Rix Avatar Gwendolen Rix
    Date: 12/22/2012 8:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    U r soo soo kind, Suk...appreciate your warm comments...Merry Christmas, gal.