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Another Piece of God's Art

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Below is the poem entitled Another Piece of God's Art which was written by poet Aaron Guttery. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Another Piece of God's Art



"Slipping into a coma, the emptiness of a dreamless sleep.
Nightmares filling your head, where nothing is what it seems.
You're underground, desperately tryna' find your way out,
tunnels all around, but doors are no where to be found.

The ground has no traction, and you're floating above air.
Tryna' hold on to something, but there's nothing there.
And then you fall, and all you can hear,
is the rippling of your clothes, and the wind in your ear.

And just before you hit the ground,
you feel something grip you, without making a sound.
The next thing you know you're looking into a Man's eyes.
You feel safe but afraid, all at the same time.

That's when you wake, but you were never asleep.
And you're lying in a bed, with the Man at your feet.
He welcomes you to His kingdom, and into His heart,
and He finishes his drawing, another of piece of God's art."

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This poem is about one's struggle to find God. About having to search, and feeling hopeless. Like we aren't really traveling through Hell, but we are searching with no idea which way we are going, blanketed in a coat of black. Like an infinitely deep hole with a small stream at the bottom, and you've just got to hope to find that stream. Then when you think all hope is lost, you realize that He has been sitting there, waiting for you, pulling you out of the darkness Himself, knowing you would look for Him. He accepts us into His kingdom. It's as if we are a piece of art, and he is adding on to us everyday..


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  1. Date: 6/29/2013 9:41:00 PM
    I just read below, your only 13? You fooled me, Never would have thought, I believe you have an old soul, and I can't wait to see what else you will write, watch out world, cause Aaron is here xxxSmile xxx I will call it a night, your my finishing touch, Voila! xxxvxxx

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 9:39:00 PM
    Your writing is a piece of art, too beautiful to describe in mere words, I think I'll just let it settle in my heart where it belongs, so glad I found your poetry, I got lucky have a great evening xxx

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 2:41:00 AM
    Omg... totally loss for word. Brilliant indeed.

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 7:47:00 AM
    I like every lines.... Congrats on your smashing write, Aaron~A.O

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 10:10:00 AM
    sweetly said

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 11:19:00 AM
    utter perfection!

    Guttery Avatar Aaron Guttery
    Date: 1/29/2013 1:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you alot! AG
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 1:50:00 PM
    Aron :-) your poem is wonderful write to find on the soups front page... '"Congratulations"" with your awesome featured poem of the week... always~ LINDA

    Guttery Avatar Aaron Guttery
    Date: 1/29/2013 1:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you! I was really suprised to see that one of my poems got featured, but I was really happy it did. Being that I'm only 13, I didn't think I had what it takes.. But I have been writing for a long time..
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 12:23:00 PM
    luv it