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The peace pipe

Native Americans hand crafted
Elaborate calumets

Made plans for peace
And each one spoke

They passed the pipe
Each took a toke

And stroked their amulets

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  1. Date: 1/6/2013 6:08:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 1/6/2013 7:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Debbie
  1. Date: 12/25/2012 7:33:00 PM

    what a cool little poem. I really like it, and congrats for your win.

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/26/2012 12:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Andrea
  1. Date: 12/24/2012 8:15:00 AM

    This is absolutely fabulous, Jon! I'm amazed by how much imagery you have packed into a few short lines. I also love the unique rhyme scheme. Awesome win! :)

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/26/2012 7:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Heather
  1. Date: 12/24/2012 5:39:00 AM

    another wonderful win Jon,,, nice sharing moment... enjoyed ..pd

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/26/2012 7:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you pd
  1. Date: 12/23/2012 1:31:00 PM

    Hi Jon and big congratulations on your winning spot xx

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/26/2012 6:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Mandy
  1. Date: 12/22/2012 11:00:00 AM

    Unfortunately, Jon, they were 'vanished' like their smoke, and sent to the happy hunting grounds with the buffalo... Terry (nice work, as usual)

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/22/2012 12:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Terry
  1. Date: 12/21/2012 10:48:00 PM

    I hope it works. I guess it did as we don't see any Indian tribal wars. Maybe we should do that on a global scale :) Enjoyed, Jon. Good night.

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/21/2012 11:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Toquyen.