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Golden Sands


 As the stars in the sky
 Come out to play
 And the moon
 Shines down on us
 This tropical shore
 We visit once more
 To stroll hand in hand
 On its golden sands
 Where we first made
 Our wedding plans
 So many years ago

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  1. Date: 1/26/2013 5:51:00 AM

    A lovely place with loving memory, a beautiful poem Elizabeth. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 7:42:00 AM

    Reminiscence of Love... Wish you fruitfulness and freshness of love... Love... Angel

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 12/29/2012 5:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Angel, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 12/23/2012 7:08:00 PM

    Merry Christmas to you as well.

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 12/24/2012 4:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Richard
  1. Date: 12/23/2012 9:23:00 AM

    A nice way to describe a revisiting of a favorite place.

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 12/23/2012 12:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Robert, long time no see :) glad you like my poem, It started with two words, Golden sands and just fell into place from there, yes I'm sure a lot of people will view it in different ways, wishing you a very Happy Christmas, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 12/23/2012 2:52:00 AM

    such a wonderful, and delightful poem, Elizabeth..most of the sands i walked where in New Zealand, yet the sentiment of your poem, is global.. have a wonderful festive season...

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 12/23/2012 5:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Harry, Have a wonderful Christmas, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 12/22/2012 2:46:00 PM

    Love this,,,,, I have written many in this fashion ;} You have a very Merry Christmas ;}

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 12/22/2012 3:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Merry Christmas to you too Debbie, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 12/22/2012 10:30:00 AM

    Dear Elizabeth, May I offer my sincere Congratulations on YOUR Glorious Years of Marriage. A fond remembrance of YOUR LOVE Superb LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 12/22/2012 3:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Harry, but this is not about me, I have in fact spent most of my glorious years, seperated and quite happy :) love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 12/21/2012 9:24:00 PM

    Elizabeth , stopping by with my warmest thoughts my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 12/22/2012 4:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you PD, Merry Christmas and a very happy new year to you, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 12/21/2012 6:17:00 PM

    Reminds me of the Sands of Nuevo Vallarta. I met my sweetie in Mexico and have had the best 21 years of my life. Loved your Poem Elizabeth.

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 12/22/2012 4:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Richard, Merry Christmas to you and Family, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 12/21/2012 8:18:00 AM

    ‡ Leaning Against The Wall Of The Light Tower Gazing From A Distance, Sweet Beautiful Elizabeth ˜ Taking A Drag From My Smoke And A Sip From My Glass And There The Two Of Your Precious Heart's Appear ˜ Hand In Hand As The Waves Lap The Sandy Shores Rejoicing At The Touch Of Your Beauty's Wrapped Amid Ambients Blue Skies Proclaiming Unto The Celestia Stars, Your Meant To Be's Love ˜ Quite Serene As Visually Beautiful! Thank You For Your Sweet Visit ˜ 'Happy Holidays.' My Love, Always, Rachel *

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 12/21/2012 8:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your comment brings a broad smile to my face Rachel, I can imagine you leaning against that tower, with smoke in your mouth sipping away, your comment is more interesting than my poem, and thanks for making me smile, love as ever Elizabeth xox
  1. Date: 12/21/2012 6:55:00 AM

    sweet one Elizabeth love xx

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 12/21/2012 7:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Mandy, love to you too xx