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Rollo West
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Seaside Magic
I will be the waves and you, you will be the sand. I’ll fall into you.
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 12/21/2012 9:03:00 PM
The best way to fall is invited by magic. Love this senryu;-). Rollo, my warmest thoughts and best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/21/2012 5:55:00 PM
you really should have a book of all these marvelous senryu and put a very romantic title on the book (if you don't have such a book already) this is so beautiful.
Rollo West
Date: 12/21/2012 6:02:00 PM
Hi Andrea, thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. Rollo
Gail Angel Doyle
Date: 12/21/2012 12:34:00 PM
Very romantic in a such a nostalgic way. Love this. Hugs and luv, Gail
Rollo West
Date: 12/21/2012 1:49:00 PM
hi Gail, thank you for stopping by and commenting on this piece. Rollo
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/21/2012 7:01:00 AM
nice Rollo fall gently though xx
Rollo West
Date: 12/21/2012 12:12:00 PM
Hi Mandy, thank you for stopping by, and I will fall gently. Rollo
Jon A Cavanaugh
Date: 12/21/2012 6:16:00 AM
Love the imagery Rollo. Great write.
Rollo West
Date: 12/21/2012 12:12:00 PM
Hi jon, Thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. Rollo
Russell Sivey
Date: 12/21/2012 6:01:00 AM
I just love, love this romantic write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly wondrous and enlightening poem this morning! What a powerful image you paint into my mind each time I read this poem! This is really a very fantastic piece Rollo, I really loved it! Great Work!!
Rollo West
Date: 12/21/2012 12:13:00 PM
Hello my friend, and thank you for stopping by and your great comment. Rollo
Toquyen Harrell
Date: 12/20/2012 10:43:00 PM
Interwoven. Very nice, Rollo. Love it :)
Rollo West
Date: 12/20/2012 10:58:00 PM
Hi Toquyen, thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. Rollo