Sweet tooth by Jon A Cavanaugh

I've just appeared - I am but two days old Tooth is my name - baby tooth so I'm told Pretty tooth, sweet tooth, now ten years old Sweet tooth "encapsuled" but one day may be gold Sugars tout and I've come out sweet tooth to fairy sold

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/8/2013 1:22:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 1/13/2013 5:00:00 PM

Thank you Debbie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2012 5:30:00 AM

Good morning, Jon,, A nice warm congratulations for the very nice win in Rick's "Any 5 Line Poem" Wishing you the best holidays to come. Merry Christmas and a happy new year. Love~LINDA

Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/26/2012 5:59:00 AM

Thank you Linda

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/23/2012 1:48:00 PM

Congratulations on this sweet write and winning spot Jon, glad I haven't got a sweet tooth though I think the fairy stole mine xx xx

Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/23/2012 6:03:00 PM

Thank you Mandy. No sweet tooth Mandy? More sweets for me then.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/22/2012 5:27:00 PM

ah, yes, I remember this sweetie write. Big congrats to you, Jon.

Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/23/2012 6:02:00 PM

hank you Andrea

Gwendolen R.

Date: 12/22/2012 3:06:00 PM

hey...what a great angle for this contest, Jon! Love the double rhyme in that last line..what a slam dunk for the ending...nice work, friend. gwendolen

Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/23/2012 5:20:00 PM

Thank you Gwendolen

Joseph May

Date: 12/22/2012 2:02:00 PM

congrats on your win Jon

Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/23/2012 5:19:00 PM

Thanks Joseph

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/22/2012 1:36:00 PM

I enjoyed this poem when I read it the first time. Congrats on win!

Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/23/2012 5:19:00 PM

Thanks Richard

Jack Ellison

Date: 12/20/2012 4:47:00 PM

This old guy who doesn't have a single tooth left of my own blames it all on having a "sweet Tooth"! LOL

Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/20/2012 10:34:00 PM

LOL, yes they do love sugars. Mine are mostly crowns now. I'm surprised I have any original teeth left.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2012 12:54:00 PM

a SWEET deal for tooth fairy, CUTE poem.

Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/20/2012 10:09:00 PM

Thank you Andrea

Terry O'Leary

Date: 12/20/2012 12:05:00 PM

Wait for it to be gold before you sell... the price is going up! Terry (funny poem, Jon)

Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/20/2012 10:00:00 PM

Thank you Terry.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/20/2012 11:31:00 AM

This was a fun one. My Grandpa had a single gold tooth, I always thought it was so cool. Fortunately all my teeth are in tact.

Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/20/2012 9:52:00 PM

Thank you Richard. This originally was a parody of a William Blake poem. But I have revised it to the point that I can no longer call it a parody.

Rollo West

Date: 12/20/2012 11:03:00 AM

Hi Jon, really enjoyed this Rhyme a lot, brings back memories, lol. Have a great day my friend. Rollo

Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/20/2012 9:34:00 PM

Thanks Rollo

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Sweet tooth

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