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Woopa Foss

Where twilight kisses the breeze
carpets of lavender blue
sweet scent of the honeydew
village of cray grew.

 Meadows fan the fragrant breeze
dry stones walls in lanes appease
purple haze hugs the skyline
upon nabwood hill.

  Guardian of cuckoo’s nest
here nature’s face has no grace
on highway of windswept flocks
beneath rolling clouds.

© Harry j Horsman 20th Dec 2012   
for Russell's Dodoitsu natural contest

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  1. Date: 1/12/2013 9:17:00 PM

    Here I am again at this fave poem of mine. Congrats, Harry. It is magnificent.

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 12:15:00 PM

    Harry, have you seen the movie called."One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest (1975)" do not worry, the title of your poem does not remind me of the movie. except the last for lines. :-). sweet loving your win~SKAT

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 10:00:00 PM

    HI HARRY... ANOTHER WONDERFUL WIN... DOWN THE LIST.. PD

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 10:19:00 AM

    One of my favorites Harry, a beautiful landscape you've painted.

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 5:24:00 PM

    Congrats on your win..Way to go..Sara

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 10:26:00 PM

    Well done Harry congrats....Seren

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 8:55:00 PM

    Nicelly done and great win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:27:00 PM

    This is a beautiful place, Harry! Congratulations on your fantastic win! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:01:00 PM

    Congratulations Harry,.....

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:08:00 PM

    Congratulations harry on your winning spot xx

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 6:26:00 AM

    Reads like a winner to me...Very descriptive and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Your kind comments are always appreciated..I hope that this upcoming Christmas is the best one in your life up unto this point and may they only get better..Sara

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 3:14:00 AM

    Beautiful writing.

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 2:46:00 AM

    Beautiful images and colours depicted...love this, Merry Christmas...Mehnaz

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 9:43:00 PM

    Pleasant one! I really enjoyed~ Always, Laura

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 11:42:00 AM

    Enjoyed the starkness and fragile beauty in this Harry.." Really well done..!

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 5:19:00 AM

    Brilliant use of Prose here...Have a wonderful Xmas!

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 3:10:00 AM

    soup

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 10:07:00 PM

    Beautifully written poem here Harry. Reads like a winner.

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 5:28:00 PM

    came back to fave this one!!!

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 3:46:00 PM

    Beautifully written love the flow an feel this gives me it is like I am in a medow feeling the breeze I just put two more poems on here my self love reading your though they are very well done Your friend Nita

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 11:59:00 AM

    Beautifully written Harry. "Meadows fan the fragrant breeze", I almost can smell the lavender. Very descriptive to the senses. Good luck in the contest and Best Wishes for the holidays to you and yours. Smiles Always, Connie

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 6:21:00 AM

    CHoice, delicious wording in this one, Harry. Enjoyed the rustic feast. Love, daver

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 5:16:00 AM

    great stuff Harry. and on behalf of my wife thanks for prayers and kind words. she will be home Sunday and is doing better. enjoy Christmas/New Year. Ron

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 8:00:00 PM

    Excellent entry into the contest, beautiful write what more can I say.

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 7:52:00 PM

    I really truly enjoyed this. Just as I enjoyed your comment its a nice image (:

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 6:53:00 PM

    Very nice! I love this line "Where twilight kisses the breeze" Kisses

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 6:21:00 PM

    wowowow,this is gorgeous, harry!!! russell is going to flip for it, and rhymed no less!! I see a big win for you!!

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 5:56:00 PM

    it sound really pretty, I really like the name.

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 5:23:00 PM

    very nice poem and thank you for the comment on mine :-)

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 5:01:00 PM

    I've never written a Dodoitsu before, this is really good and naturey, with a lot of images.. love this!

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