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In Moon's Glow

I’m sailing on a blue sea in moon’s glow. Beyond the horizon my days are kissed with magic; far into the past I go. Walks along a cherry lane! An autumn mist! Reality or just a fantasy? Beyond the horizon my days are kissed. I think I can recall a Hanah Lee. . . on wisps of memory to which I cling. Reality or just a fantasy? What birds of splendor did I once hear sing? I yearn to know again; I slowly drift on wisps of memory to which I cling. Upon a dragon’s tail I wish to lift! Dreams ripple on the waves, and to a land I yearn to know again I slowly drift. To run again with bare feet in white sand! I’m sailing on a blue sea in moon’s glow. Dreams ripple on the waves, and to a land with magic - far into the past I go! the magic moon . . . in moonlight’s absence could fantasy survive? Inspired by the Peter, Paul and Mary song "Puff the Magic Dragon" and the "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser Poetry Contest" of Richard Lamoureux

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  1. Date: 1/12/2013 11:46:00 AM

    Andrea,Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 11:19:00 AM

    Great poem! I could just see myself drifting through the misty, wavy moonlight. Not likely, but it's a great thought. ;)

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 11:09:00 AM

    Andrea congrats on your win, excellent write...David

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 3:32:00 AM

    I love the line 'beyond the horizon my days are kissed' souperb Andy congratulations on your winning spot xx

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:46:00 PM

    Andrea.. I'm here to offer support In Richard's "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser " contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 7:59:00 PM

    Great poetry Andrea! I really felt uplifted by this! Congratulations! E=mc²

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 7:37:00 PM

    hmmm I saw Pet Pan in this too! Congrads on your win Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 7:32:00 PM

    Awesome write Andrea congrats on your super win xxx

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 6:46:00 PM

    I agree, you are so talented, congratulations.

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 2:48:00 AM

    Your poems inspire me. Your language rich, your talent great, your heart an ocean of tenederness! Thank you!

  1. Date: 12/31/2012 4:05:00 PM

    A fantasy beyond our dreams can take us farther than moon beams. A tale of lore from long ago can teach us things we use to know. Deep in our hearts where secrets live. The peace exists when we forgive. :) Peace.

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 10:56:00 PM

    Hi Andrea my dearest friend! I'm sorry, if I've missed to read this outstanding terzanelle of yours. Yes, you did it right , very well and in a very unique way. I'll take it as my best example and favs. The image is so splendid and awesome. Mine just focused on imagination itself. I already edited. I hope I did it better. Million thanks for your help and precious time my dear friend. Good luck and best wishes always in the contest. HAPPY HAPPY NEW YEAR! love always, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 5:45:00 AM

    Hi Sweet Andrea,thank you so much for your stopping by...I appreciate so very much.. and I luv your very beautiful write here ,,really enjoyed this <3<3<3 :) luv and hugs

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 7:59:00 PM

    This is awesome Andrea,,, It was the first grade when I first seen the school play puff the Magic dragon, I fell in love with puff & wanted to save him from his loneliness. LOVE I?T !!!

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 10:33:00 AM

    You must join the owl and the pussy cat in their pea green boat and go a sailing through the sea of memory. Love this one, Andrea. Happy dreams on these and all Holidays. Love, daver

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 12:03:00 PM

    I am so pleased you decided to enter Richard's contest, I knew you would blow me away! I love this, you really do make this form look like a piece of cake to write, you are so good at it!

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 10:52:00 AM

    Magnificent! Best of luck in the contest. -- Sean

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 7:07:00 AM

    re-visiting your terzanelle..many congrats with your many wins dear, sorry not able to congratulate on each.

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 10:42:00 PM

    ‡ Made Me Think Of Edgar Allen Poe's, 'A Dream Within A Dream,' Sweet Beautiful Amazing Andrea ˜ 'To Run Again With Bare Feet In White Sand.' ˜ Bo Derek In The Movie, 'Ten' ˜ Tis The Image My Eyes Find When Picturing Your Beauty Amid This Wonderful Verse And 'Magical' ? Beyound A Slightest Of Doubt ˜ You Are A Fascinating Poetess Whom Covers An Endless Spectrum In Both Enchantment As Soulfelt Colours ˜ Love The Repet; Another Touch In Poe ˜ 'Happy Holidays & Merry Christmas.' My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 7:49:00 PM

    Merry Christmas to you too!!! What a fabulous flight of fantasy! Who doesn't love 'Puff...' marvelous flow and rhyming. Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 10:14:00 PM

    Wow, Andrea. I love the way you weaved the rhyme and meter into a wonderful dreamlike poem. Excellent work.

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 8:18:00 PM

    Andrea, this is so dreamy...I think its wonderful...Caleb.

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 3:01:00 PM

    oh dear to think i have to compete against this gem.. just love this though

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 1:45:00 PM

    wow the imagery is outstanding. I use to watch puff the magic dragon till the VCR tape broke.....:(

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 11:58:00 AM

    Fantastic fantasy, Andrea! Terry

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 11:30:00 AM

    Enjoyed the scope of this Andrea, Its glow is well Expressed by your good self.."

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 11:11:00 AM

    Hi Andrea, what a great poem you have written here, really enjoyed the childness about it. Rollo

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 10:55:00 AM

    Nice one! Glad to see you found some time to work on it... it's really nice! Love the questionku too :)

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 10:24:00 AM

    Hi Andrea great I loved this, all the best to you and your family at xmas and the new year owen

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 9:37:00 AM

    I got lost in this fantasy. Beautifully written that has the reader captivated but such nostalgia. Love, Gail

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