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Bali On My Waiting List

Was it a fantasy?
Seashore breeze on caught
Live on a dream

Did I slept yesterday?
 'Cause the view was stunned
Stunned in Bali

Was it just fantastic?
Footprints on damped sand
Welcoming peace

Can I just be extend?
Bali is too great
But I leave soon

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 2:33:00 PM

    Just a note to say hello and wish you the most amazing weekend.

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 1:18:00 AM

    have a wonderful time...this is awesome....

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 12/22/2012 5:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Harry have a wonderful holiday too for you and your family :D wishing you a peace and wonderful Merry Christmas :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 12/20/2012 5:17:00 PM

    yanny, I can see you are loving Bali. Are you there right now?? How exciting if you are. Very nice!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 12/20/2012 5:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes Andrea I just arrived last night, and today the adventure begin, too bad i cannot share some pictures in here, later if I have a good pictures i will share it into my blog and I will let you know :D
  1. Date: 12/19/2012 5:55:00 PM

    Sounds like a great place to visit..Enjoyed reading ..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 12/19/2012 7:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Sara, enjoy your holiday too :D-hug, yanny
  1. Date: 12/19/2012 12:39:00 AM

    Very nice!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 12/19/2012 12:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Susan, glad that you like it :D -hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 5:31:00 PM

    Excellent attempt, Soup mail.