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'A Lovely Ballet'

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'A Lovely Ballet'

As the warmth of the sun embraces the land The birds think of love and make a nesting plan They restlessly search for the perfect mate With determination the males seek their fate On a branch, in the forest after a lovely ballet A female is unimpressed with a boy birds grand display "I love you!" he chirps, as she pushes him with her foot "Enough you fool!" she shrills, so loud, that their branch shook Burlesque (simply a trivial story) December 18, 2012 Submitted to the contest, Sweet Poems(old)

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  1. Date: 6/12/2013 4:37:00 PM
    A cute image pictured here, Constance. Poor male bird got his ego stomped. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 10:57:00 AM
    Constance, a perfectly sweet story! Congrats!

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 1:51:00 PM
    Thank you very much for the nice and sweet imagery............ ........ it's very sweet........... congrats!!! SKAT

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 4:34:00 PM
    This indeed is very lovely. It is just beautiful. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 10:11:00 PM
    Constance, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 1:13:00 PM
    Ha ha, poor male bird, being scoffed at, lets go rescue him! This is a brilliant write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this outstanding and remarkable poem this afternoon! I loved this delightful tale Constance! Great Work!!