A Sandwich by David Williams


Caleb Smith Date: 3/27/2013 9:30:00 AM I never know what to expect from you, David, but I always enjoy it.
Carol Eastman Date: 1/4/2013 10:37:00 AM BRAVO! So inventive, imaginative, ans sweet... A GREAT write... Loved it!
DAVID ELLSWORTH Date: 12/28/2012 10:27:00 AM I've seen a lot of analogies but nothing quite as creative as this.
Anne Currin Date: 12/24/2012 10:03:00 AM Awe! This is AWESOME! It's ever so tasty when you find that sandwich of your life ;) love this, going into my favorites!
SCRIBE ML Date: 12/23/2012 1:37:00 PM Creative way to look at togetherness. Good one! Well wishes to you and yours David!
kathryn collins Date: 12/21/2012 9:49:00 AM awwww.
samantha townsend Date: 12/21/2012 12:28:00 AM that's funny
Juli- Michelle Date: 12/20/2012 3:57:00 PM Very cute! Thanks for visiting my page, I really love this one :)
POETESS DARKLY Date: 12/20/2012 3:36:00 PM awe now I'm hungery :)
Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 12/20/2012 1:23:00 PM Waaay cute!! and conceptually brilliant! Who'd a thunk it... a sandwich? A LOVE POEM! Well done David. Best wishes, Keith
Katherine B. Date: 12/20/2012 11:59:00 AM Nice!
Jay Loveless Date: 12/20/2012 10:00:00 AM Haha I like this. Really and truly. truly a sandwich would not be complete without the others
Anna Lo Date: 12/20/2012 9:00:00 AM Sir David... is that sandwich comes with fries and soda?..I want one for a take-out!!.. :P -Anna :)))
Shaz Cheesman Date: 12/20/2012 2:37:00 AM oooh very good David! nothing like a perfect Sandwich :) that brings lots of smiles and it kinda makes me feel like having a sandwich now - Shaz
Carl Fraser Date: 12/19/2012 3:13:00 PM This is great David, now im hungry, love the contrast, very nice, Carl, blessingso
Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/19/2012 2:00:00 PM Good appetite, hope it tasted good. - Well witten David. - Hoping Christmas will be blessed time for you and your family. - / / Anne-Lise :)
harry horsman Date: 12/19/2012 9:40:00 AM awesome David, love the diversity here on soup, and your poem is a wonderful example of that,, like this....
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/19/2012 9:12:00 AM wel I've never been called a butty before lol, nice one David xx
Ann Roske Date: 12/19/2012 8:57:00 AM Enjoyed this write.. if we could be part of a sandwich the world would be a better place =)
Yesha Shah Date: 12/19/2012 4:09:00 AM Sweet sweet write. loved the innovative romance here in your poetry. So enjoyed reading it.
Toquyen Harrell Date: 12/19/2012 12:25:00 AM And I am the stomach and I am hungry for you. Lol. Love it, David. It's so awesome. Great job. Make me laugh.
HOLLY MOORE Date: 12/18/2012 6:20:00 PM I don't know how you turned a bagel... pickle…butter…cheese..meat…and a wrapper into something romantic. But, you did it! Only you, only you...Hugs, xxoo Holly
Caleb Smith Date: 12/18/2012 6:02:00 PM Hey David. That's a sandwhich indeed. It's good to read your unique poetry again..missed it in my...absense. Hope to get the flame again...Best of wishes...Caleb
ilene bauer Date: 12/18/2012 5:01:00 PM very sweet!
robert johnson Date: 12/18/2012 3:34:00 PM Koo Koo Kachoo.:)
Rollo West Date: 12/18/2012 12:43:00 PM Hi David, really enjoyed your write through the deli, lol. Great job my friend. Rollo
david scott Date: 12/18/2012 12:24:00 PM nice write good use of metaphores davidscott
Russell Sivey Date: 12/18/2012 12:10:00 PM Definitely true for our significant others...mine fits perfectly within this description! This is a tremendous poem my friend! I really enjoyed reading this sentimental piece, Great Work!!
Connie Gildersleeve Date: 12/18/2012 11:46:00 AM Very nice write David. A sandwich of love. Happy Holidays to you and yours. Connie
Owen Yeates Date: 12/18/2012 11:41:00 AM Hi David brilliant write my friend, just how one should feel about a partner or wife, all the best Owen

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A Sandwich

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