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  1. Date: 3/27/2013 9:30:00 AM
    I never know what to expect from you, David, but I always enjoy it.

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 10:37:00 AM
    BRAVO! So inventive, imaginative, ans sweet... A GREAT write... Loved it!

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 10:27:00 AM
    I've seen a lot of analogies but nothing quite as creative as this.

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 10:03:00 AM
    Awe! This is AWESOME! It's ever so tasty when you find that sandwich of your life ;) love this, going into my favorites!

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 1:37:00 PM
    Creative way to look at togetherness. Good one! Well wishes to you and yours David!

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 9:49:00 AM

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 12:28:00 AM
    that's funny

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 3:57:00 PM
    Very cute! Thanks for visiting my page, I really love this one :)

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 3:36:00 PM
    awe now I'm hungery :)

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 1:23:00 PM
    Waaay cute!! and conceptually brilliant! Who'd a thunk it... a sandwich? A LOVE POEM! Well done David. Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 11:59:00 AM

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 10:00:00 AM
    Haha I like this. Really and truly. truly a sandwich would not be complete without the others

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 9:00:00 AM
    Sir David... is that sandwich comes with fries and soda?..I want one for a take-out!!.. :P -Anna :)))

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 2:37:00 AM
    oooh very good David! nothing like a perfect Sandwich :) that brings lots of smiles and it kinda makes me feel like having a sandwich now - Shaz

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 3:13:00 PM
    This is great David, now im hungry, love the contrast, very nice, Carl, blessingso

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 2:00:00 PM
    Good appetite, hope it tasted good. - Well witten David. - Hoping Christmas will be blessed time for you and your family. - / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 9:40:00 AM
    awesome David, love the diversity here on soup, and your poem is a wonderful example of that,, like this....

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 9:12:00 AM
    wel I've never been called a butty before lol, nice one David xx

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 8:57:00 AM
    Enjoyed this write.. if we could be part of a sandwich the world would be a better place =)

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 4:09:00 AM
    Sweet sweet write. loved the innovative romance here in your poetry. So enjoyed reading it.