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Tidal Moments- A peak in the window of my imagination-

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Tidal Moments- A peak in the window of my imagination-

Cnt say m thrilled bwt t nor cn I 
say I despise t__ this feeling 
Dat's got m staying up at ths 
tym nd thinking of hw complete 
I'd b nxt 2u!

Myb ts jst a sensation driven by 
temptation 2dearly hold u close, 
oh my one nd only meaningful 
emotion, my lead nd cause 
2deppression__ ryt now u may 
be as perplexed as m ego bt tyk 
th chance nd go, go ahead nd 
label m as delusion's own 
daughter or anything in a 
Psychiatrist's dictionary for sum1 
whose mind nd feelings r 
forcefully yet perfectly trapped 
in obsession's own trap. If ts a 
crime I'd b more than glad to 
do my jail time. Jst allow m jst 
this once,the time to indulge nd 
b lost in this moment, nd I 
swear no matter how much th 
distance thru my imagination u 
closer than scalp to my skull! So 
allow m 2ask U_ plz apply ur 
love potion nd caress my skin as 
u myk m feel this relation, Gods 
own creation nd th end of my 
emotional starvation...  Shud I 
gv u a more detailed 
explanation or wud u prefer a 
demonstration? unfortunately ts 
all in my imagination nd I swear 
this z ambidextrously written in 
my imagination ofcoz_?! I jst 
thot wth u knowing hw wild nd 
far u myk my imagination go 
uhhhm fuck Tht, myk t hw wildy 
u myk t gallop, myb jst myb 
2mrw nyt nd th nyt Afta I won't 
stay up at 2o'clock nd wish u 
were nxt 2m coz then th feeling 
may be mutual__nd I won't hv 
so much to carry on my own!!

#Anathi Mtila

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  1. Date: 1/6/2013 9:50:00 PM
    Hi Anathi, it is a pleasure reading your first poem on the soup... your poem is very interesting.... enjoyed... always~LINDA

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 4:06:00 PM
    Welcome to poetry Soup, an interesting write. [Carol's speaking of the use of the F word] You did get your point across in text talk without it ;)Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 10:39:00 AM
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  1. Date: 12/20/2012 10:38:00 AM
    A very warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today Anathi. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol