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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
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Senryu 2
My arms are empty There is no one to hold me... Tears are shed my love © 16/12/2012 ~GG~
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 12/24/2012 8:08:00 PM
Mandy, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD
HOLLY MOORE
Date: 12/18/2012 7:02:00 PM
Do you need a hug? There I just gave you one. That's a sad write..Thanks for commenting on my cinquain..Hugs, Holly Moore
HGarvey Daniel Esquire
Date: 12/18/2012 11:13:00 AM
Dear Mandy, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. With absolutely no reservations I will hold YOU, absorbing YOUR sadness. The tears YOU shed will not be lonely, as I tighten my LOVING Embrace Superb Senryu LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 12/17/2012 1:36:00 PM
Mandy, a very sad feeling.... hugs to you...pd
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/17/2012 2:15:00 PM
xx
Yesha Shah
Date: 12/17/2012 5:53:00 AM
Sad but well expressed a write Mandy. best wishes and love for the upcoming festive season.
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/17/2012 2:15:00 PM
thanks Yesha love xx
Robert Mayy
Date: 12/17/2012 3:35:00 AM
cyber hugs, short and sweet
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/17/2012 5:09:00 AM
back at you Robert and thanks xx
Anne Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2012 11:28:00 AM
Would it help if I held your hand (?) - Very good written Mandy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/16/2012 12:02:00 PM
always xx
harry horsman
Date: 12/16/2012 10:59:00 AM
powerful sentiment we all share
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/16/2012 11:23:00 AM
Thanks harry xx
David Williams
Date: 12/16/2012 10:15:00 AM
soup mail...
David Williams
Date: 12/16/2012 10:02:00 AM
Mandy...............................................................................................................................the space represents the emptiness in their hearts....David
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/16/2012 10:05:00 AM
Do you mean the ellipsis that I forgot David or something else?
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/16/2012 9:55:00 AM
Good one, Mandy, and so sad for this christmas season!
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/16/2012 10:01:00 AM
Thanks Andy love xx
Vicky Tsiluma
Date: 12/16/2012 9:47:00 AM
oooh Mandy! How can sadness produce such a wonderful write? Nicely done!
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/16/2012 10:02:00 AM
Oh what a lovely thought a squeeze form an octopus called Sukmawati , would go down a treat love xx
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/16/2012 10:01:00 AM
Good imagination my sweet Vicky xx
Sukmawati Komala
Date: 12/16/2012 9:19:00 AM
in the moment like this,,, i wish i could be an octopus to hugs hugs hugs you tightly ever my dear angel GG...<3<3<3 :) i luv your senryu....so very much...:)