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Senryu 2

My arms are empty
There is no one to hold me...
Tears are shed my love


© 16/12/2012 ~GG~

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  1. Date: 12/24/2012 8:08:00 PM

    Mandy, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 7:02:00 PM

    Do you need a hug? There I just gave you one. That's a sad write..Thanks for commenting on my cinquain..Hugs, Holly Moore

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 11:13:00 AM

    Dear Mandy, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. With absolutely no reservations I will hold YOU, absorbing YOUR sadness. The tears YOU shed will not be lonely, as I tighten my LOVING Embrace Superb Senryu LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 1:36:00 PM

    Mandy, a very sad feeling.... hugs to you...pd

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/17/2012 2:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    xx
  1. Date: 12/17/2012 5:53:00 AM

    Sad but well expressed a write Mandy. best wishes and love for the upcoming festive season.

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/17/2012 2:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Yesha love xx
  1. Date: 12/17/2012 3:35:00 AM

    cyber hugs, short and sweet

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/17/2012 5:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    back at you Robert and thanks xx
  1. Date: 12/16/2012 11:28:00 AM

    Would it help if I held your hand (?) - Very good written Mandy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/16/2012 12:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    always xx
  1. Date: 12/16/2012 10:59:00 AM

    powerful sentiment we all share

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/16/2012 11:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks harry xx
  1. Date: 12/16/2012 10:15:00 AM

    soup mail...

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 10:02:00 AM

    Mandy...............................................................................................................................the space represents the emptiness in their hearts....David

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/16/2012 10:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Do you mean the ellipsis that I forgot David or something else?
  1. Date: 12/16/2012 9:55:00 AM

    Good one, Mandy, and so sad for this christmas season!

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/16/2012 10:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andy love xx
  1. Date: 12/16/2012 9:47:00 AM

    oooh Mandy! How can sadness produce such a wonderful write? Nicely done!

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/16/2012 10:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh what a lovely thought a squeeze form an octopus called Sukmawati , would go down a treat love xx
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    Good imagination my sweet Vicky xx
  1. Date: 12/16/2012 9:19:00 AM

    in the moment like this,,, i wish i could be an octopus to hugs hugs hugs you tightly ever my dear angel GG...<3<3<3 :) i luv your senryu....so very much...:)