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Wisdom In Pink

Day closed the page in pink
Hazel is the perfect color that should be painted in aesthetic
At the time I sing the thirst, drips politely slink

I ended each stanza in my perspiration strokes which almost static
No longer confined to the leaden nor sooty cavity
Hazel is the perfect color that should be painted in aesthetic

I no longer limiting clause in the stratum of my sanity
In the paradigm I dig the esoteric passion... found, still implied
No longer confined to the leaden nor sooty cavity

New world revealed the window of heart which ever snide
Once again I tried to crawl on the existence of a sense
In the paradigm I dig the esoteric passion... found, still implied

Monotony ever buried the blockade of nous in a mature life of dense
Common sense stood, lived independently in undisputed 
Once again I tried to crawl on the existence of a sense

Ego on behalf of inspiration left me on deserted
Common sense stood, lived independently in undisputed 
Day closed the page in pink
At the time I sing the thirst, drips politely slink

Wisdom mode on
Terzanelle in deep
Will the sky come in pink?

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  1. Date: 1/21/2013 3:32:00 PM

    Oh Yannie I so wish I understood this but beyond making me smile I don't, maybe you can tell me about it in soup mail I'd like to know. Thanks so much for stopping by my writes. Light & Love

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/21/2013 4:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This is inspired by the pink sky in bali when i was on holiday Debbie, here I felt so happy and peacefull makes me want to leave all of my negative inspirations, if you want to see the picture you could visit my bog in www.mizzy-sebuahperananjiwa.blogspot.com, just copy paste this link :D
  1. Date: 12/17/2012 1:27:00 PM

    Yanny, a very clever poem,,, love the questionku on the bottom...pd

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 12/17/2012 5:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Linda, glad that you like it :D, it's really a pleasure to see you stop by Linda :) wishing you a great Christmas there :D-hug, yanny
  1. Date: 12/15/2012 5:08:00 PM

    A lovely poem, Yanny - good work in this poem. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 12/17/2012 5:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Anne you always make my day :D wishing you a happy holiday :D -hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 12/15/2012 12:48:00 PM

    ‡ I Can Feel As Sense The Depth Brushed Amid This Heart's Unique Yet Beautiful Verse, Sweet Beautiful Yanny ˜ I Believe The Sky Shall One Day Present Itself A Vast And Varied Array In Love's Endless Beautiful Hues As Colours ˜ 'Pink,' Most Surely Shall Be One Of They And Yet All, Shall Be Wrapped Amid The Beautiful In Love's Ribbons & Bows ˜ 'Happy Holidays.' My Love, Always, Rachel *

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 12/17/2012 5:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Rachel, your comment always beautiful and uplifting, glad to see you in here :D - hug, missing you, Yanny