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Part two of So much do I desire of that which I may never have

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Part two of So much do I desire of that which I may never have

Desire
 
I would love to kiss my way into the depths –
 the depths of your heart, your life, your acceptance.
 I wish I could kiss away all that seems to bind you –
 To your current state of mind – desire to be alone –
 taking you on a million miles of empty, shallowness, - 
a painful journey that has brought you to the edge –
 the edge of an abyss, a deep, ghostly, black hole 
from whence there will be no return. 

Reality
 
Of coarse all of the above is seen through the mind’s eye,
 that writes from it’s own perspective,
 it’s own desire and experiences with the Princess.

 B. J. “A” 2
 June 28th 2007

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  1. Date: 12/22/2012 3:02:00 AM

    I love the way you have done Desire, it's amazing xx

    Atfield Avatar William J. Jr. Atfield Date: 12/22/2012 9:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Merry Christmas Mandy : I do thank you for the glowing praise Mandy, “ I love ” and “amazing xx ” just makes my heart want to get up and dance and my efforts - at this form of expressing - want to sing.
    Atfield Avatar William J. Jr. Atfield Date: 12/22/2012 9:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I only wished that the Lady, this poem was written to, had one iota of positive passion for how I had felt about her and my efforts to enlighten her. Que sera sera !!!! May the New year rain down upon you, and yours, all that your hearts desire and your souls require . B. J. “A” 2 ( Bill .