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The Phantom of Delusion

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Below is the poem entitled The Phantom of Delusion which was written by poet Yanny Widjanarko. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The Phantom of Delusion

I am the floating pieces within the black hole of the verses
The dark phantom take a side emitted in remaining shadow
Who could stop me from my battle towards to the numbness?

One night the moon hid itself into an echo 
Those, the conceited tribal of the mystic valley compete me in a crime 
The dark phantom take a side emitted in remaining shadow

They hinted a race to steal the pendulum ore of a time
Missing clue about who the hell they were facing
Those, the conceited tribal of the mystic valley compete me in a crime 

I summoned my mainstay tools called the time machine
In all of the sublimity of my narcissism, I flew
Missing clue about who the hell they were facing

Pursuit the tail which left me to the situation which I knew
Sneaking through the darkness, I sprint to the vessel of a good shot
In all of the sublimity of my narcissism, I flew

In every ease of victory named as the beauty of the black spot
Sneaking through the darkness, I sprint to the vessel of a good shot
I am the floating pieces within the black hole of the verses
Who could stop me from my battle towards to the numbness?

Awake on gasp
Drool mapped on pillow
Did my husband aware?

(*scratching head with confusion) 

2nd place
Contest Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser 	
Sponsored by: Richard Lamoureux

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  1. Date: 1/12/2013 11:48:00 AM
    Yanny, Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/12/2013 6:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Skat! :D Your comment also wonderful Skat :)
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 11:12:00 AM
    Yanny congrats on your win, very good write...David

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/12/2013 5:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you David, glad to have you here :D
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 3:36:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning spot Yanny luv xx

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/12/2013 3:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mandy :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 1:02:00 AM
    Very well done Yanny! You brought the fantasy to life. Congrats on your win!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/12/2013 3:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Vicky :D -hug, yanny
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:47:00 PM
    Yanny.. I'm here to offer support In Richard's "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser " contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/11/2013 9:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Linda, missing you here :) hopefully you will start your beautifully pen soon :D and i would gladly to read yours and enjoyed it :) - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 8:14:00 PM
    Congratulations and thank you Yanny! I very much relate to your dreamstate here especially these days! ;) E=mc²

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/11/2013 8:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Edward, it is really a pleasure to have your support here as well :D
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 7:45:00 PM
    Quite a dream! Congrads on your win Light & Love

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/11/2013 8:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Debbie, glad to see you today :D
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 7:36:00 PM
    Congrats Yanny on your special win xxx

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/11/2013 8:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Rose, your presence is special too :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 6:55:00 PM
    I loved this poem, you are so good Yanny! Congratulations.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/12/2013 12:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You met the challenge very nicely, you should be very proud of yourself. Good Morning Yanny.
    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/11/2013 8:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Rick, this is my first challenging contest too, I really enjoyed it very much in seeking the inspiration of this poem :D -hug, yanny
  1. Date: 12/31/2012 6:08:00 AM
    enjoyed reading this... good luck

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/1/2013 2:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Apoorva :D it's a pleasure to have a visit by you too :D
  1. Date: 12/15/2012 8:30:00 AM
    Yanny; This is a very good poem and I hope you win. Good luck. Lucilla

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 12/15/2012 10:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Luci, you always bring warmth in every pages of mine :D - Hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 12/15/2012 1:22:00 AM
    Oh, phantom of delusion and it had you scratching your head in the end with confusion!! (that was funny what you wrote). Anyway, I know the poem itself is not funny, but it shows me that you have a lot of imagination, Yanny!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 12/15/2012 1:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea you bring me a smile today by giving an amusing cute comment :D, I'm glad that you enjoyed :D
  1. Date: 12/14/2012 8:06:00 PM
    This is great! Good imagery! Good luck in the contest :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 12/14/2012 8:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks anne :D good luck for you too:D
  1. Date: 12/14/2012 5:38:00 PM
    Reads like a winner in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..I am okay..I will be busy for a few days with different things pertaining to the upcoming Christmas..Well probably about a week I will be busy..Sara

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 12/14/2012 6:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well, I wish you to have a wonderful moment Sara :D, happy holidays and Merry Christmas :D
  1. Date: 12/14/2012 6:43:00 AM
    I am going to fav this Yanny, it drew me in from the first stanza, it is better than reading a story book fable at bedtime end. You intrigue me, wish I knew you better, thank you my dear for the interesting read and the echoes of the moon shed a silver light on your pitter patter heart xxxx Rose

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 12/14/2012 7:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It's a pleasure to knew you more as well :D, I adore the beauty of your verses too ^^
    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 12/14/2012 7:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much Rose, your poem also inspiring a lot :D
  1. Date: 12/14/2012 6:16:00 AM
    LOve the Imagery..Good luck for the win,. Mehnaz

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 12/14/2012 7:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mehnaz, your support is really encouraging :D