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Disturbed Child

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Below is the poem entitled Disturbed Child which was written by poet Trevor Bain. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Disturbed Child

That disturbed child
The teen girl with no friends, 
and is rejected by her loved ones
She feels broken inside,
like theres no other choice
She takes the iron razor, 
she puts it to her arm and hopes the pain will fade,
but in the end it only makes her feel worse
She does this to herself not because she is sad, 
but because she doesn't think any one cares
She thinks 
What if I put this razor to my throat,
and ended my life
Would they care then?
She feels like no one cares 
What she doesn't realize is, 
if she died a river of tears would come,
even faster then the blood would run from her
If she only knew life can be brighter 
If she would only see, 
that she is loved
That disturbed child, 
We miss her
and theres no getting her back
What could we have done
Was there any changing her mind
Only God knows

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  1. Date: 1/10/2013 9:44:00 PM
    what a folly....a lot of souls feel that way. i hope more can be said , and more can verbalize their love for one another....nice poem.

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 7:09:00 PM
    For fate has no structure on how things turn out, but this I know god does only know, very sad poem, made mi tear... Great write of emotion<3 Carma

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed
    Date: 12/13/2012 7:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Welcome to the soup Trevor