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  1. Date: 1/8/2013 7:10:00 AM

    You left the most Christmassie thing till last .. and tea!! I hope you remember the delights of clotted cream and scones! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 9:29:00 PM

    Congrats David..... Seren

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 12:22:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win. Su

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 10:21:00 PM

    This is really great and fun my dear friend, David! I have enjoyed so much! lol. My big and warm congratulations on your awesome win! love always, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 2:43:00 PM

    Wonderful and crazy piece,David...Nicely written...Congrats on your win...

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 2:08:00 PM

    Congrats on a fun entry and a great win!

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 12:51:00 PM

    david, I enjoyed your rendition a LOT because you had some really great and original lines in yours. I especially liked the last few days and the choir sounding like a dead turtle dove! Congrats.

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 7:09:00 AM

    Congratulations David , no sugar or milk in mine , ok xx

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 2:21:00 AM

    Hi David congrats on your win in the contest, loved this, hope your having a good christmas my friend, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 12/25/2012 8:51:00 PM

    David, ;-) Congratulations with your little Christmas win... have a nice one... always~ Tex

  1. Date: 12/25/2012 8:25:00 PM

    Cute write Bro : ) Merry Christmas, hope you had an amazing day filled with love and blessings! Hugs

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 8:11:00 PM

    This was fun all the way but I cracked up when I got to,"mince pies and monopoly"...enjoyed it, David.

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 12:12:00 PM

    david sopu mail please

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 10:47:00 AM

    Lots of fun with this one. Good stuff. Love, daver

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 3:42:00 PM

    Kinda poignant, the circle of life. :) Hope you have a wonderful christmas David.

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 12:08:00 PM

    David; This is really nice. Thanks for sharing. Thanks for sharing and for reading my poem. Lucilla

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 9:53:00 AM

    Nice work. But the 12 days of Christmas begins on Christmas day!

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 7:39:00 PM

    A cute rhyme from your "crazy mind", David.:) A clever rendition of this song! Made me smile with every line. I think I understand your version more. Hope all's going well with you and yours...wishing you a Merry Christmas!:) Love, Mikki

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 6:03:00 AM

    It was me ..... Thanks for the tea, David. You did not recognize me .... as Snowman. - - Love it!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :))

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 11:27:00 AM

    Hi David yes you are crazy home made mince pies I'll be round on the next sleigh, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 9:35:00 AM

    Ow geeee to forget the present of your wife...B-).Very funny take on..YOu gave me a chuckle

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 8:46:00 AM

    Oh I dont like the 11th day that much David... lol nice write xxx

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 7:59:00 AM

    And why not , watch out for them white coats David they get comfy after a while lol xx

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 3:46:00 AM

    :) a sweet yet interesting write. very clever how you co related the first day with the last one. enjoyed reading this a lot.

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 9:45:00 PM

    I like this poem. It made me smile. Thanks

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 1:04:00 PM

    A brilliant write, simply a brilliant write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this awesome Christmas lyric this afternoon! What a delightful poem David, I loved every word of it, Great Work!!