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Lost Boy

Deep in the forest A group of people wander Looking around with torches Crunching on the leaves Hoping to find someone lost A boy squeals with pure delight
Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 12/13/2012 10:33:00 PM

    Another great write Russell, with such a great outcome. Rollo

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 10:07:00 PM

    I love how you ended it with the boy's happiness at being found!

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 2:24:00 PM

    Oh I love this happy ending to your sedoka today Russell. A stunning poem indeed. Hugs always, Gail

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 1:24:00 PM

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  1. Date: 12/13/2012 11:17:00 AM

    beautiful sedoka Russell..I could hear this little boy squeal with delight...its a fantastic scene you have painted with your artistic quill...I simply loved this.