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You Are

You are here, there and everywhere,
You know what's on my mind
You hear my voice, my genuine plea
Your promise, so divine
You know my misfortunes, my weary will
Your advice, please be still
Your road is rough, still be tough 
You are going to win,
Your comforting words soothed my mind
Your peace of mind I did find
You made me what I am today
YOU ARE, YOU ARE, YOU ARE

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  1. Date: 12/19/2012 11:11:00 AM

    A belated but very warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this afternoon Nedra. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 9:44:00 AM

    You wrote a great poem. You are from Jamacia right? This poem is you bearing your soul giving us entrance inside your private feelings and thoughts..good job! I liked a Jamacian boy my freshman year in high school but so did 1/2 the girls in my freshman class that was back in 1993-94. I write to an Indian guy on ZOOSK and guess where he's from Jamacia Queens, New York! Feel free to express anything you want to express I have written and published some personal poems and I felt better afterwards.

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 6:24:00 PM

    "First off welcome to the soup FAM,,, Second fantastic words I agree with Richard...

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 4:54:00 PM

    great write Nedra,welcome to the Soup,let's put a little Jamaican spice in.lol