Two Ice Cubes by Michael J. Falotico


Karen Harris Date: 2/19/2013 11:56:00 AM I like this one too !
Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/6/2013 6:28:00 PM Nice to read your write this eve. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Mehnaz Veetil Date: 12/23/2012 2:11:00 AM love this image,truly sensual ..great write and congrad s on your win Mehnaz
craig cornish Date: 12/20/2012 1:09:00 PM A fun and sensuous write Michael
Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/19/2012 9:59:00 PM Michael, , congratulations on giving Tracie, "What she rEaLlY rEaLlY WaNt-ed"..lol... always~ PD.....
Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/18/2012 8:12:00 PM wow :-) Michael..I'm gliding down the hill along with the melting image... hot hot... love it... always~PD
Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/18/2012 6:22:00 PM nicely done and nicely won, Michael. What a novel idea on the two ice cubes. I see you have your santa clause hat in the picture. ME LIKES.
David Williams Date: 12/18/2012 11:38:00 AM Michael congrats on your big win my friend, loved it first time around....David
Owen Yeates Date: 12/18/2012 11:34:00 AM Hi Michael set free ice cubes beautiful, sooner put them in some rum and black though, loved this poem great, all the best Owen
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/18/2012 1:54:00 AM Congratulations on your winning spot Santa xx
Yanny Widjanarko Date: 12/14/2012 8:20:00 AM woow, beautifu lSanta Michael, my fav verse is "Where raining flames kiss my face..." so romantic! I have my good reading today, thank you for share Santa :D
Shaz Cheesman Date: 12/14/2012 4:00:00 AM oh i agree with catie...very sultry!! gets one's imagination going that is for sure lol....amazing what you can do with ice cubes hehehe.....Shaz
harry horsman Date: 12/13/2012 9:51:00 AM i'll never look at my ice cubs the same way again,, love this Michael, it's different, and a little hot...just love the last stanza
Catie Lindsey Date: 12/12/2012 9:46:00 PM sultry! Loved it. hugs, catie :)
Sukmawati Komala Date: 12/12/2012 8:52:00 PM Hi Michael ...like your new look..ha ha and thank you for your ice cubes,,, enjoyed it much...nice day to you Santa...<3<3<3
kerry singleton Date: 12/12/2012 5:01:00 PM Haha..very cute write :)
Cindy Cayton Date: 12/12/2012 4:23:00 PM perfect rythmatic flow! calculated almost...hahaha, take care and God bless, please check out the final masterpiece, will be gone the rest of the next couple months off the computer. and know that I appreciated your encouragement on the concrete poem of the rose, today the world was supposed to end? well, God said no, I guess... people trying to calculate, no wonder our country is in depth, wrote a new 1 today. Love ya Brother, Cindy
Gwendolen R. Date: 12/12/2012 2:57:00 PM This is my very first ice cube poem, Michael...wow,...what great ideas u have elaborated on...is there nothing u can't write about???....Fun. U wear Santa's hat nicely!! Gotta get myself one of those! :)
David Williams Date: 12/12/2012 2:16:00 PM soup mail...
Leonora Galinta Date: 12/12/2012 10:16:00 AM Another outstanding couplet which i enjoyed reading my dear friend, Michael! Thank you so much for sharing and again for you kind visit! More power and blessings! love and hugs, Leonora
Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 12/12/2012 9:13:00 AM Wow, this is an awesome write..the imagery is really good here. But, of course you know your work is outstanding!! :) I love ""raining flames kiss my face." enjoyed Michael! Anytime I see passion, love or anything in that genre, its a must read for me. Thanks again!
David Williams Date: 12/12/2012 7:07:00 AM hey Michael send me some of those rocks would you buddy, love it...Dave
Russell Sivey Date: 12/12/2012 6:59:00 AM I loved this incredible write my friend! I absolutely enjoyed reading this harmonious and dynamic poem here this morning! You have brought a smile to my face with your piece Michael, thank you for showering me with your words! btw, I love your Santa hat! Great Work!!
Mystic Rose Date: 12/12/2012 6:23:00 AM Nice creative poem, I'd like to say it is cold but on the contrary it is hot, thanks for sharing the passion, xxx

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