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One Leap Tanka Contest

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Below is the poem entitled One Leap Tanka Contest which was written by poet Melani Udaeta. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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One Leap Tanka Contest

Climbing the gate fast
The big sign posted says 'Closed';
Beautiful water
summoning my rebellion,
with one leap I'm in the pool

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  1. Date: 12/20/2012 12:59:00 PM
    Super nice work! Enjoyed your creation. :) gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 5:53:00 AM
    Big congratulations on your win Melani love xx

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 8:40:00 PM
    Melani :-) stopping by CONGRATULATE you with your awesome win in Susan's "Tanka " contest... good write~PD

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 3:59:00 PM
    I really loved it and am very happy it made the list. BIG congrats on your big win.

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 3:16:00 PM
    This one shows a free spirit. ME LIKEY!!