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sit and cry

Gone are his days of happiness
He is a lonely man instead
Gone are his days of happiness
No waves of kindness  to caress
So suddenly his wife had died
Leaving a broken man to sit and cry
Gone are his days of happiness







Form:  Rondelet

Dated 11/12/2012

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  1. Date: 12/19/2012 10:12:00 PM

    Seren, congratulations with your awesome win in Debbie's "Rondelets OR Simply 7 lines" contest... always~ pd

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 5:22:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Sass love , happy to share a spot with you xx

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 4:02:00 PM

    HI Seren nice write! you needed 4/8/4/8/8/8/4 in syllable count...no matter I enjoyed it Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/14/2012 6:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oh just saw that you placed it, that was nice of you. Thanks
    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/14/2012 6:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol Debbie I never get it right, thanks for the info will write it in my notebook for future reference.
  1. Date: 12/12/2012 9:10:00 PM

    Oh dear this is sad, life can be a bitch sometimes xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/13/2012 5:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yea it sure can ...Seren
  1. Date: 12/11/2012 8:44:00 PM

    Oh this is a sad one...It reminded me of my dog that I just lost as I started reading it..A very nice Rondelet write Seren..

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/11/2012 9:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Haha my ipad doesnt like O's by the look
    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/11/2012 9:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oops anither Ipad typo, should say Sorry
    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/11/2012 9:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sorty to hear of your dog, its a wrench to the heart when that happens Dan .I know too well...Seren