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Take Me

my eyes opened
out came a light
no
a sight
a sight unseen
no walls only glass
all visible
in glory in detail
I swam through the sphere
high low
in out
far near
all in my hand
I crossed oceans
climbed mountains
kissed stars
and everywhere
you are
nose to nose
take me NOW
I am yours

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  1. Date: 12/27/2012 8:09:00 PM

    wow, what a romantic poem. ME LIKES!!! (well, it could be a religious poem too!!! what say you?)

    Mason Avatar Ralph Mason Date: 12/28/2012 7:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I have a difficult time distinguishing between romance and religion so I guess it's both but I would like the poem to be whatever you feel strongest about it. Warm thoughts, Ralph
  1. Date: 12/27/2012 8:28:00 AM

    Now I wonder who this person is?..I know a person for you said nose to nose..Enjoyed reading this one..I like that crossed oceans, climbed mountains..Thanks for stopping by..May your New Year be a blessed and happy one..Sara

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 2:50:00 PM

    You have skills Ralph. Great job!

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 5:48:00 AM

    like this very powerful and very well written poem...

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 2:14:00 AM

    Beautiful write Ralph!...sensuous...I like how you've used nature to develop the theme. Nice!

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 11:34:00 AM

    Nice write here...enjoyed reading!!!