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A Metaphor

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A Metaphor

There was a young bird, served and protected by her mother.

but the little bird wanted to fly..

though her wings were still frail,

the little bird left to see what's there outside her paradise..

-the real world was harsh.

-there is cruelty

-there is pain

-it's treacherous.

-it's hurting her wings.

and the little bird keeps on falling..

but she keeps on trying..

the little bird wont give up

for she knows that one day her wings will be strong enough

to take her far above the blue skies..

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  1. Date: 1/21/2013 12:04:00 PM

    nice imagery--- hope she finds joy beyond those blue skies!

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 11:14:00 AM

    A belated but very warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this afternoon Jeinara. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

    Odonio Avatar Jeinara Odonio Date: 1/23/2013 7:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Carol =)
  1. Date: 12/14/2012 11:14:00 PM

    amen, love it

    Odonio Avatar Jeinara Odonio Date: 1/23/2013 7:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Stephan =)
  1. Date: 12/11/2012 9:02:00 AM

    Beautiful piece! Welcome to the soup!!