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I lay my tender heart

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  First pub 2011.


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I lay my tender heart

I lay my tender heart at your feet
and my soul and very being I surrender
My desire and quest
to fill your heart with joy
and summer
by the sweetest of emotion and affection.

To stand by you
to provide and protect you
a bond so strong nothing can tare it apart
until death do us part
and later
we meet once more
in a much better place
once again
reunited.

Peter Dome. copyright.2012.

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  1. Date: 12/30/2013 5:07:00 PM
    Your a Lady, your knight in shining armour. may I carry your colours into battle my Queen. Il ay my heart at your tender feet. Sir Pete.

    Hoose Avatar Mary Jo Hoose
    Date: 12/30/2013 5:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh now you just went and made my heart sigh Sir Pete...:)
  1. Date: 12/30/2013 4:52:00 PM
    Aww this would definitely be a fine write to read to a lady and melt her heart Pete darlin'...:)

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 6:42:00 PM
    Very beautifull, peace debra

    Dome Avatar Peter Dome
    Date: 2/5/2013 2:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much kind lady. So pleased you enjoyed it. Just got to find someone to read it too. Take good care. Have a great week. Best wishes. Pete.