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Jon A Cavanaugh
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Bellyaching
Bellyaching Harsh noise making Does it stop lovemaking
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 12/17/2012 1:06:00 PM
Hummmm good question... xox~pd
Jon A Cavanaugh
Date: 12/17/2012 9:29:00 PM
Thank you pd. Haikus are very hard for me. This will probably be my first and only one.
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/11/2012 3:48:00 PM
Hey jon. I am stopping here for my last comment. Glad you got on the winners list. Congrulations!
Jon A Cavanaugh
Date: 12/12/2012 10:03:00 PM
Thank you Andrea
Toquyen Harrell
Date: 12/11/2012 12:06:00 PM
Too funny. Congrats, Jon :)
Jon A Cavanaugh
Date: 12/12/2012 10:12:00 PM
Thank you Toquyen
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/11/2012 7:34:00 AM
Provocative Questionku. Thanks for entering.
Jon A Cavanaugh
Date: 12/12/2012 10:12:00 PM
Thank you Richard
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/11/2012 4:20:00 AM
I doubt it Jon ,lol congrats on your win my friend xx
Jon A Cavanaugh
Date: 12/12/2012 10:21:00 PM
Thank you Mandy
Vicky Tsiluma
Date: 12/11/2012 1:49:00 AM
LoL Jon, nice questionku! Congrats on your win!
Jon A Cavanaugh
Date: 12/12/2012 10:30:00 PM
Thank you Vicky
Eileen Ghali
Date: 12/10/2012 4:59:00 AM
Nothing should stop lovemaking! ;) Tell that tummy to behave and have fun to the sound of music masking the other noises! Great, cute write. Makes me want to write one about belly dancing...which I enjoy to the max, by the way! Thanks for your sweet post on my poem! :) You make me smile!
Jon A Cavanaugh
Date: 12/10/2012 9:33:00 PM
Hi Eileen. Great to see you on my screen. I love your smile and your lovely comment. Wishing you the very best.
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/9/2012 7:50:00 PM
hahaha, depends if you ask that of a man or of a woman!!
Jon A Cavanaugh
Date: 12/9/2012 8:07:00 PM
And what kind of harsh noise? The loud gurgling sound from an upset stomach or the complaints from the man or woman.
Terry O'Leary
Date: 12/9/2012 2:47:00 PM
I hope not! Make love, not war... Another good work, Jon... Terry
Jon A Cavanaugh
Date: 12/9/2012 2:50:00 PM
Thank you. I don't usually write Haikus. Thought I'd try one out for a contest.
