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Broke Down

Broken promises and shattered dreams,
Believing in hope is not what it seems;
A damaged heart beyond repair,
No more reason to love , no reason to care.
Trying to fit in, only to be cast aside,
Hiding alone so no one sees me cry;
To give unto others is so naive,
Cause they just want more to watch you bleed.
To love in vain, is a stone cold slap,
Its hard to take when they wont love back.
Lord have mercy, if theres any left for me,
Relieve this anguish and set me free.
I feel so broken i dont know how to heal,
Just give me hope that happiness is real.
I surrender all to you this day,
Please remember me when you come back this way.....

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  1. Date: 12/9/2012 10:39:00 AM
    The disappointment and tears ... True love, we must always fight for ...... and it's about giving and receiving. - The world is not full of love, but if we all give a little of ourselves .... maybe it had hosted more LOVE. - A good poem Carl. - Wish you all the best in life. - Have a nice Sunday and a nice new week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)