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About This Poem

As My Path

Gnarled trees
My path is here
Beside the trees
They twine around the path
Old, ancient with many years
As my path


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Entrant into Michael J. Falotico's ""A Road Still Driven"" contest

12/8/2012

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  1. Dietrich Avatar
    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 12/9/2012 8:40:00 PM
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    Nice one for his contest. it's vignette, huh? You are great at doing so many of the short forms.
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    DON JOHNSON
    Date: 12/9/2012 2:09:00 PM
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    the path betrod, was older still, when Cain n Abel , climbed the hill :) good one mate!
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 12/9/2012 1:07:00 PM
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    Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Thanks for stopping by..Sometimes we travel the same path too long and need a change...Sara
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 12/9/2012 10:54:00 AM
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    all the best Russell I am sure this must do well xx
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    Constance La France
    Date: 12/9/2012 8:56:00 AM
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    Russell, this is a beauty, a wonderful Vignette, I wish you the best of luck in the contest. I so enjoyed reading your poetry today. Constance
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    jack horne
    Date: 12/9/2012 7:44:00 AM
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    clever write, my friend
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    David Williams
    Date: 12/9/2012 5:16:00 AM
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    Russell I just love your use of metaphor here, a great analogy, very well done and good luck...David
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    Rollo West
    Date: 12/8/2012 11:06:00 PM
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    Another outstanding one Russell. I really love the way you construct your writes. Rollo
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    Juli- Michelle
    Date: 12/8/2012 10:35:00 PM
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    I love this one. Very scenic and good luck in the contest! -JuliMichelle