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My Birthday

My Birthday is coming soon. Everybody is getting ready to celebrate. Last year they had a party too. They said it was in my honor, but they forgot to send me an invitation. I went anyway. I went in very quietly, so as not to disturb anyone. They had beautiful decorations and lots of food to eat. They also had lots of liquor to drink. I stood silent in a corner. I saw everybody eating, drinking and having fun. I thought that they would offer me some, but they didn't even notice me at all. Soon a fat man dressed in red came in, yelling - HO, HO, HO. All the children ran to him. They all carried on, like if he was the most important of all. Midnight came and everybody kissed and hug eachother. I too opened my arms to see if they would hug me too, but no one did. They all exchanged gifts. I left, I felt like they had shut the door in my face. This year I'm going to have a party. The biggest party of all. I am inviting all of you. I hope that you will come. If you decide to come - I will write your name with Gold Letters in my guest book. You have been invited. It is now up to you if you want to come. I will be waiting with Opened arms. Your friend JESUS...
12/08/2012 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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  1. Date: 1/14/2013 10:19:00 AM
    Awesome,,, I really thought your birthday was Christmas day. I always tell people "remember the reason for the season" Love it ,,,,you have a blessed day ;}

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 1:43:00 PM
    Lucy , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. PD

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 3:08:00 PM
    I can't express how much I love this one. If you have a chance read the poem I wrote yesterday, I think you will appreciate the message.

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 9:19:00 AM
    This is another superbly wonderful poem. I love it so much. taking it again! Thank you so much. May God bless you my dear friend! love always, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 12:37:00 AM
    I loved this one Lucilla...It's nice to know you think about him as well.<3

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 10:42:00 AM
    Great poem! Thought provoking! Cynthia

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 11:35:00 PM
    Excellent. Great message. Like it.

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 9:54:00 PM
    this is outstanding. What a cool way to picture Jesus and the way we tend to leave him out of christmas!

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 3:42:00 PM
    Luci, this is a strong poem, and I really enjoy the true message behind it :D, great poem! -hug, yanny

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:19:00 PM
    Hey this is different, and amazing, just love this..

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 12/9/2012 7:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you harry. I am glad that you like it. Many blessings. Lucilla
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 1:51:00 PM
    Nice one xx

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 12/9/2012 7:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot. Lucilla
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 1:30:00 PM
    Wow, that is a GREAT poem, Lucilla. So true. Some have forgotten the reason for the season. Glad you noticed it. Love ya, my friend :) Toquyen

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 12/9/2012 7:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you. Glad that you enjoyed it. Lucilla
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 5:35:00 AM
    Not nice to forget birthdays child, but that's probably the way most people celebrate Christmas today. - There is more and more about money, gifts, good food and drink. - A very well written poem. - There are still 14 days until Christmas, hope to see you again before then Lucilla. - Have a nice Sunday. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 12/9/2012 7:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne Lise. We should never forget why we celebrate Christmas. Lucilla
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:52:00 PM
    Boom! That was great!

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 12/9/2012 7:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you much. Lucilla
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 10:36:00 PM
    awesome. I was prepared to wish you a happy birthday upon opening the poem but the words were different than i expected. wonderful, thanks for sharing. -JuliMichelle

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 12/9/2012 7:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you. My Birthday is in March. Glad you liked it. Lucilla
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 10:21:00 PM
    Hola Lucy, wow... Jesus birthday is the most celebrated ..right... I am glad I've been invited can't wait for the joy,, hope no shut doors this year... thank you for the verse... always~pd

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 12/9/2012 7:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hola, my friend. Como estas? Isn't it great to be invited to this party? Many blessings. Lucy