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Magic Has Left the Land

The cycle obliterates on itself Sand returns to mere dust at times The ground turns on empty rivers Calling for nothing that could chime The sections of Earth go harshly A sublime look into what once was Where rivers flowed near the flowers And trees carrying leaves brought pause Now a lifeless landscape litters the scene Trees are all but dead and they follow The lack of vegetation that forms here And life is breathless and is all but shallow Magic has left the land where I am No more joy or happiness exists I just pray that one day magic can return And we can rid of all the tricks and twists
Russell Sivey Entrant into Sandy Ivy D's "Life with no magic" contest 12/8/2012

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  1. Date: 12/20/2012 1:34:00 PM

    Super write and win Russell

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 9:35:00 AM

    Many congratulations on your awesome win my dear Russell! love/hugs, LG

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 4:37:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Russell xx

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 12:23:00 AM

    gosh, this one somehow had got past me. You did a good job showing a dreariness of no magic. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 8:41:00 PM

    Russell, Congratulations with your lovely deep win enjoyed the imagery. Goodnight :-) LINDA

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 7:36:00 PM

    Congratulations Russell ....Seren

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 6:41:00 PM

    thank you' Sandy

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 7:49:00 AM

    awesome deep write here, Russell - a big winner, for sure

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 7:33:00 PM

    Russell, a wonderful poem,, deep... i can not imagine life without... good luck in the contest..pd

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:21:00 PM

    Wonderful entry for the contest Rusty, it would seem to be the truth you tell in this as there are many who feel the same way. All the best, Love Lizzie