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Anther dust

flower leaves whisper
the wind transfers anther dust
grown up lullabies

©Ellie Daphne van Stralen 2012 

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  1. Date: 12/10/2012 9:59:00 PM

    Very different last line to go with the flower line. A great way to say it: grown up lullabies.

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 7:06:00 AM

    I have not grown up with lullabies - But my children and my grandchildren have always gotten it from me. - This was sweet Ellie. - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 12/9/2012 7:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It is interesting how people - when reading my words - see their own pictures....... AND are sharing them........... THIS is another thing I like here! :-) Ellie Daphne
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 7:36:00 PM

    Ellie, thank you for the invite to your blog... it was nice... like this haiku.. a very deep and beautiful image... always~pd

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 3:13:00 PM

    Ahhhh, The sound of childhood memories, when mama would sit there in her rocking chair and sing lullabies too put you too sleep, loved this... Xoxox Carma

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 12/8/2012 3:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It is so nice to actually READ that you like this one and share the picture it creates....... TY so much! :+) Ellie Daphne.