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A Poem on a Story from Holy Bible 1

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A Poem on a Story from Holy Bible 1

This Poem is dedicated to all my Christian friends on Poetry Soup 
and else where in the world in the festival month of Xmas.


A Poem on a Story from Bible 1 of 2

The Healing at the Pool



One fine morning
When the Sun was spreading
Its refreshing morning breeze
On the soil of Jerusalem. 01

All the sick and suffering people
Had started gathering
On a spot 
Named as Five Porches
At the place, known as ‘Sheep Gate’. 02

They all were here
So that they may get a chance
To have a dip in the holy water of the pool
Of Bethzatha*
To get rid of their sufferings and sicknesses. 03

The desire and wish 
To touch the holy water and
To get well soon
Had brought them there
In spite of their pity deplorable conditions. 04

On that fine beautiful morning
Along with the rising Sun
Jesus had come to Jerusalem
For a religious festival. 05

He was standing on one of the porches
And was looking towards those people 
Who had gathered there
With all the love and kindness 
In his heart for them
For all those
Who were either sick or blind,
Lame or paralyzed
Or had sufferings of some other kind. 06

Ravindra
Kanpur India 8th Nov. 2012    To be concluded soon in Part 2

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  1. Date: 7/8/2013 4:10:00 PM
    love it,,, now part two ;}

    Kapoor Avatar Ravindra K Kapoor
    Date: 7/8/2013 8:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Debbie for liking the Poem. Love and best wishes ......Ravindra
  1. Date: 12/12/2012 4:51:00 PM
    Lovely beginning to the story!! Let me see part 2

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:34:00 PM
    A lovely reminder Ravi, of a savior who gave so much and yet was rejected. We always learn the hard way, not heeding goodness but seemingly choosing the wrong things so often. You manage to tell the story with much passion. Love, Elizabeth

    Kapoor Avatar Ravindra K Kapoor
    Date: 12/8/2012 8:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Elizabeth for your kind words. Shall be visiting your page soon. Love and best wishes...Ravindra