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Short Circuit

Sexy woman bends over
Her delicious temple revealed
Desires short curcuit my brain









A.Ertsland
December 8th 2012

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  1. Date: 3/21/2013 8:14:00 AM

    Hope you are well?? Linda

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 9:44:00 PM

    Arlid, this taste and reads like a you want freedom haiku.... he he he... love it...pd

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 12/11/2012 10:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Erotiku,perhaps:-) LOL
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 1:20:00 PM

    The title is spot on, Arild! Yes, I have observed this phenomenon where men go short-circuited...then they loose all sense and start talking slurred ....

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 12/9/2012 2:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    bwaahahaha....:-)
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 10:04:00 AM

    Is your brain functioning again Arild? Lol you got me full of smiles with this. Typical male :D hope you are keeping warm love & hugs CTC

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 12/9/2012 10:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol..no,still white smoke coming out my ears:-) thanks for stopping by dear Wilma
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 8:09:00 AM

    what's a tempel Arild? I tried to look it up can't find it? did you mean temple's? as in heer cleavage? [circuits] Hope that helps you. Light & Love

    A  Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/10/2012 9:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol..... the joy is in trying..<------ LOL.....
    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 12/9/2012 10:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :-) poetic freedom
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 7:21:00 AM

    Fun poem, gets you to think, where was I again? Sorry a little distracted.

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 12/9/2012 10:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol,yes it does:)
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 7:09:00 AM

    Arild woohoo my friend...hot...David

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 12/9/2012 7:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :-) thanks David!
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 7:52:00 PM

    oooo.wow.... lol...dirty and funny...oh well.. what can i say... "MEN".... xox~PD

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 12/9/2012 4:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol..better close my eyes next time:-)
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:09:00 PM

    Sounds like a tempting dilemma and can't imagine you turning your back on the moment; men, such great opportunists! :)

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 12/9/2012 4:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oh yes..all these dilemma`s:)
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 3:11:00 PM

    Damn!! Sexy sexy! Very nice ;)

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 12/9/2012 4:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol:)
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:56:00 AM

    hahaha, maybe you were the Santa claus in my poem?

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 12/8/2012 12:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ho-Ho:-)
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 10:37:00 AM

    Oh a bright spark, especially in writing this wonder, really like this

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 12/9/2012 4:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks harry!
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 7:33:00 AM

    lol Brings any man to there knees.... Eve with the apple... Enjoy your weekend as well my brother... Michael

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 12/9/2012 4:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks my good friend:-)
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:58:00 AM

    Naughty but nice Arild xx

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 12/9/2012 4:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks dear Mandy xox~