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ON THE OCEAN WAVES

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ON THE OCEAN WAVES

Seagulls bob at rest on the ocean waves. 
A tired fisherman the predawn chill braves, 
disgorging his catch on quay. 
 
Gutting knives of vendors clicking like claves, 
staining blood red and sliming the cask staves. 
A twist of the wrist the key. 
 
Barter for *snoek, which in newspaper saves – 
Very old trick passed down by the Cape slaves, 
before 1834 being set free. 
 
A vanilla dawn sun the wave crests paves. 
North-westerly wind mercilessly raves,
on the ocean waves with glee. 




*SNOEK - a line fish

Scientific name: Thyrsites atun
Other/Common names: Cape Snoek, Barracouta (in New Zealand and Australia)

8 December 2012

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  1. Date: 1/5/2013 5:20:00 PM
    an interesting one, Su. You are really into forms and their varieties. You are my last comment to respond to. Trying to decide whether to hang around some more or not. So much to do this weekend. UGGG.

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 11:14:00 AM
    An excellent piece which I've enjoyed reading my dear friend! Thank you so much for sharing your poem and especially for new words or information. I've already came across the word Barracouta but the snoek is new for me. Thank you. I also never had tried yet this poem form. I hope I can compose a poem with this form some other time. Thank you so much and all the best! love/.hugs, LG

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 8:02:00 AM
    I like this very much, Su

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 7:07:00 AM
    I like this one Su, well done xx