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Below is the poem entitled Sixteen Questions which was written by poet Luke Irwin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Sixteen Questions

If I confessed my pensive mind, would you interrupt me?
If I longed to show you something stirring, would you look?
If I wrote you your own poem, would you read it?
Would you press it in the pages of a book?

If I tried to give you something would you take it?
If you were shivering, would you let me keep you warm?
If I took a little trip, would you go with me?
Would you walk with me if it began to storm?

If I brought you wine would you drink with me?
If you wept, could I dry your tear?
If I took your hand would you dance with me?
If I serenaded would you hear?

If I kissed you, would you keep your eyes closed?
Would you comfort me if I began to cry?
When I’m gone do you ever miss me?
If I left you would you stop to wonder why?

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  1. Date: 12/18/2013 12:13:00 PM
    that was so sweet a beautiful poem

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 8:43:00 AM
    could this be a song? it is good enough to be...

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    Date: 12/10/2012 1:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Harry. Perhaps I should get my guitar out.
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:14:00 PM
    This is good. I like it. too many questions without answers. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 11:14:00 PM
    Very nice Luke...Mind opening thoughts...