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  1. Date: 3/17/2013 5:27:00 PM
    glad i came back to here John, yes i'm learning too, but i like the theme...

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 11:05:00 PM
    a new word I didn't know!!! but you made me look it up and it really makes a great meaning for this haiku!!!

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 7:44:00 PM
    soup mail

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 5:00:00 PM
    LOL what a concept! I do hear where you are coming from hiaku can be infuriating I once tried to write a slam haiku [of course there is no such thing LOL ] [I sneezed a haiku/the rooster coc doodle dooded/A black train choo chooed] yup I wrote that! We find it so hard I believe because the eastern mindset asked fo is objective and the view of nature asked for is a revealation of a shamanic concept of god. I am coming to love the puzzle of them.

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 12/30/2012 5:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    In peru please do NOT eat anything uncooked!!! Through my guide swore I would not get sick and the kitchens were veted..well you see I have still been sick for days now! If you wish to work on the form let me know. Light & Love
  1. Date: 12/22/2012 11:05:00 AM
    Really nice touch on this Haiku.... I've been reading about the hybrid haiku studies. They've been working with a sauerkraut additive, I believe. I wonder if that stuff is available in bulk..... Jake

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 6:06:00 PM
    interesting write. well penned. not sure what a verklempt is.

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 9:16:00 AM
    love it.

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 4:52:00 PM
    I love this John... i've been enjoying haiku today .on line and a book my son owns...luv...linda

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 4:19:00 PM
    haiku is a process and a prayer ;) Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 2:56:00 PM
    Well said in a haiku poem, John - wish you a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Wulf Avatar John Wulf
    Date: 12/7/2012 2:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne Lise, best to you as well.