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Cool Blue

Frosted white branches

   garlanded in silver and

       d r i p p i n g   i c i c l e s. . . . 

            Crystalline lights are turned on.

                  My new tree shimmers cool blue.


(only new one not used in a Dec. contest yet)

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  1. Date: 1/6/2013 6:09:00 PM

    Nice to read your write this eve. I liked the letter breaks ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 7:41:00 PM

    Andrea, pd said hi. I'm also stopping by with my own purpose. Wishing you the best new year 2 come. Luv~ Sidney not SKAT

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 11:18:00 AM

    I have been away for a very long time. How are you doing? Compliment of the season!

  1. Date: 12/25/2012 11:03:00 AM

    It's definitely a Christmas wonderland with your cool blue tree in the background! Merry Christmas to you, Andrea! Thanks for your comments throughout the year. Your kindness has been greatly appreciated. I caught a bad cold three weeks after Sandy hit New York City. I am recovering and feeling better now. Best wishes and God bless you. Peace and Love, Andrew.

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 8:51:00 PM

    Andrea, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 5:40:00 AM

    Congratulations Andrea... luv~pd

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 1:33:00 PM

    Ok cool lady congrats once again love xx

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 7:05:00 PM

    Hi Andrea - This poem is a real tree-t! (Sorry, could not help myself.) I really do like this. Especially like the image of cool blue and those dripping icicles. - Hope your holidays are full of love and happiness! Gail

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 4:24:00 PM

    I don't recall seeing this poem at all in my contest. you should check your entries for sure, but I don't remember it. it's a pretty image :)

    Dietrich Avatar Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/20/2012 4:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I forgot to enter it, that has to be it, susan.
  1. Date: 12/15/2012 3:59:00 PM

    Cool for sure, Andrea. Been a while...hello

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 7:30:00 PM

    I can picture the tree. Just put mine out which is early for me. Nicely done. love phyl

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 6:03:00 PM

    so many lovely tankas! Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 1:23:00 PM

    Andrea, this is a lovely Tanka, so visual, I can almost see your new tree. Well done. Constance

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 1:38:00 PM

    Brrrrreautiful. :)

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 6:51:00 AM

    love this tanka, Andrea - I'm still not sure if I've got the hang of tankas or not

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:12:00 AM

    Wonderful imagery in this Tanka Andrea!Love this.

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 12:08:00 PM

    Andrea you shimmer with these words.. I like....yep Lapland over here...Merry Christmas to you and Joe...David

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 9:49:00 AM

    amazing contrast here Andrea,,,

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 2:34:00 AM

    cool blue ..very cool and lovely color scheme Andrea .. so nice your new tree inspired u luv .. good luck ..

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 11:50:00 PM

    Lovely Tanka, one of my favourite forms, beautiful picture it paints ( I think even if Lisa tells the young ones who she is they won`t have a clue, but Jonathan and Scuben both know who she is)

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 10:58:00 PM

    Beautifully said. Tfs

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 9:50:00 PM

    I think it's beautiful. I can close my eyes and see it. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 8:20:00 PM

    You describe it so well I can picture it in my minds eye, thank you for the beautiful illusion, will go to sleep imagining it, xxxx Rose

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 1:34:00 PM

    Dear Andrea... I know you are from Utah,,lol,, all i wanted 2 see if you were paying attention to me... he he he.. Nathan, is from Oregon,, right by your state.. by the way love the tree and shimmering look... good tanka...pd

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 12:48:00 PM

    One of the best today, Andrea. - Bravo!! Wish you a nice relaxing weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 12:37:00 PM

    Gorgeous descriptions! I can see it perfectly in my mind. Excellent write!

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 11:55:00 AM

    Very beautiful, Andrea!

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 10:55:00 AM

    Cool Tanka!! Your tree sounds beautiful...Thanks for ALL your comments...Hugs, Holly

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 10:21:00 AM

    ooh - i love a blue tree! if i had a christmas tree, that's how i'd decorate it, too. wonderfully descriptive poem! (btw, i liked daniel day lewis in "lincoln" much more than i liked the movie overall, so i agree with you).

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 9:21:00 AM

    Very descriptive and expressive work..I can almost see that tree from Georgia..I know that it is pretty..I hope to select one and get it up this week end..Reads like winning material..Thanks for stopping by my work " Miles And Miles"...My aim was to write a Tanka for Susan's contest while on the way to Tifton, Ga. yesterday to get Cody for Christmas break..However, I ended up having to drive for Tommy woke up with his back in spasm..He apparently did something to it in his sleep..Sara

    Kendrick Avatar Sara Kendrick Date: 12/7/2012 9:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I wrote that one on the way back but was wanting to wait until today and try another one or two before I entered one..Sara
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