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Sandman

the awakening
while you dream you are asleep
strews sand in your eyes

©Ellie Daphne van Stralen

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  1. Date: 12/11/2012 1:36:00 PM

    interesting imagery... well done

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 6:43:00 PM

    Ellie, thank you for the mail... ... thank you for sharing your wonderful haiku,,, lovely... Looking forward to reading more of your poems tonight. Always~ & Forever ;-) PD

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 7:49:00 AM

    Ellie, this one is very interesting. It makes me think of an author I studied many years ago in Spain . All I remember is the author was Unamuno, something like that. And one of his themes was one that has been explored by many others: how our whole life is but a dream!