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cute and simple questionKU

*rub a dub dub*
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  Bath time is fun,
  wrinkled small fingers 
  why is it slippery?

*OUTDOORS*
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  Fresh rain-droplets
  white dandelions
  Why is the sky-lit blue?



*contest*

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  1. Date: 5/19/2013 9:43:00 PM

    cute, simple, few words yet powerful enough to induce deep musings. very nice piece.

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 11:35:00 AM

    clever and witty write, Skat

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 6:38:00 AM

    I can picture a child asking these questions. Love the image of raindrops on dandelions. They are my favorite flower. Also thank you for commenting on my poem. I still haven't figured out how to respond to messages, or just send messages on this site (I need an instruction book) but at least I figured out how to comment on poems. I will be posting again today.

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 4:20:00 PM

    Fantastic questionku... Congrats Skat~A.O

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 12:53:00 AM

    hey, nothing new to comment to, but I see here a poem that I never congratulated yet. BELATED congrats to you, Skat.

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 6:30:00 PM

    Love these question kus. Both have a sweet I.nnocence about them Love SuZ

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 9:18:00 AM

    Excellent haiku set with fantastic ? Thanks for your visit and for valuable comment. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 1:53:00 PM

    Nice haiku... Best wishes~A.O

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 6:14:00 PM

    love the haiku's ;}

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 6:34:00 PM

    Another nice set of haiku entries.

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 6:22:00 PM

    short, sweet, and curious -- like a child. brava

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 5:00:00 PM

    Lets go back to the origins of wonder - when I mistrusted nothing and cared for everyting - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 2:54:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Congrats on your win..Very creative work..Sara

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 11:40:00 PM

    wonderfully simple and elegant ...great write...naive,subtle,beautiful...

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 3:40:00 AM

    Lovely haiku!

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 9:27:00 PM

    Reminds me of questions my children asked when they were small...and now my grands. So inquisitive. Enjoyed !!

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 7:29:00 AM

    congratulation dearest one :) very nice sharing ..luv your questionku... <3<3<3 hugs hugs hugs

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 10:23:00 PM

    Like the rub a dub dub very nice haiku

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 10:54:00 PM

    Love the haiku's ,,, have a blessed New Year ;}

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 6:11:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Winner in my book..Thanks for the kind reviews..Sara

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 11:17:00 AM

    This is nice. #1 - because it's wet. #2 - because God made it - that's why it's blue. Am I right? let me know. What is up with PD? I hope she is not sick. Many blessings. Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 10:00:00 AM

    Good to hear from ya, SKAT. Like your kiddie Haiku. Just an old, old kid myself. Love, daver

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 6:28:00 AM

    ....................... ‡ Just Returning Unto Your Radiant Beauty, Sweet Beautiful Girl ˜ To Say 'Thank You Sooo Much,' For Your Kind Warm As Wonderful Visit In Which I Found Extremely Joyful! ˜ Reading Back My Earlier Com Unto Your Precious Beauty, Yesss, Love Is A Beautiful Feeling ˜ My Love, Forever & Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 5:09:00 AM

    Nice piece Skat... lovely... thanks for stopping by... Love... Angel... Happy New Year.

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 3:17:00 AM

    Have a blessed and fruitful New Year to you and to your family friend SKAT :) Wish you all the best!! thanks for all your support and for stopping by :) Hugs, Maria

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 3:14:00 AM

    I like that!

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 5:49:00 PM

    skat, or sydney? Thanks for all your comments on my poems. They were fun to read. I think you are on a poetry high today, my friend. Anyway, to let you know. I really do love this set of questionku and i hope you will be doing MORE. Right away. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 8:27:00 AM

    Hi my dearest Sidney! Stopping by again to great you and your whole family a very Happy New Year! I'm wishing you all the BEST! love always & 4ever, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/31/2012 8:01:00 PM

    Hey, SKAT, I just wanted to wish you a happy New Year... Thanks for your help in my getting started here on PSoup. Just find the most beautiful poem ever and pretend it's from me to you. BTW great write here.... Love Ya.... Jake

  1. Date: 12/31/2012 5:21:00 PM

    Beautiful Questionkus, SKAT. I imagine those little eyes scanning the blue sky...priceless! Happy New Year to you and yours! Love, Annalise

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